Raindrops Needs More Love80 stories ·223 members
Everypony is the Best Pony6,490 stories ·1,051 members
Cryosite2,675 stories ·252 members
The Sympathy for Background Ponies Society997 stories ·395 members
Raindrops has been a blank-flank for longer than anypony she's known. She moved to Ponyville and got a job at the post office in hope that she would meet somepony who might help her discover her special talent. But when her new co-worker Derpy crashes into her, they go on a journey of self-discovery, friendship, and muffins.
Page generated in 0.098 seconds
Total duration
643 users online
754,716 hits today, 2,004,447 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Not a bad story. Though, it might have helped to add a bit more narrative and/or descriptions. It just seems a little dialogue-heavy. Otherwise, good job!
This was surprisingly good! I would love to see more of Raindrops/Derpy
That was a fun little story. I look forward to more of their adventures!
I fun little read indeed! Great job
Cute.
Amusing and somewhat interesting. Unfortunately the characters felt on the weak side. I've seen a lot more done with these characters and while nothing here felt derivative, there wasn't really enough put into them to feel unique. If anything Derpy's muffin obsession was the most outstanding feature between them, and obvious fanon staple.
I don't really understand why flying/not flying was made into such a big deal. For awhile I got the feeling that perhaps Raindrops was another chicken, and incapable of flight. Towards the end it seems like she was just afraid of Derpy crashing into her again? Making terrain into a conflict for pegasi seems odd, as well as arbitrarily adding time to the package delivery time by walking when the boss is expecting flight... just overall seems kind of poorly planned out.
Lastly, I don't actually get what Dropsy got her cutie mark for.