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Blue Blaze {COMET}


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While walking through Sweet Apple Acres, Twilight and Applejack come across a crash landed meteor. Soon after, all hell breaks loose in Ponyville while Twilight's trying to put the puzzle pieces together. It doesn't help the Element of Magic when she has to deal with an alien species dropping off in the middle of nowhere and becoming her responsibility.

Meanwhile, meet Griffin Pearsons, an intelligent, foul-mouthed teenager. To his surprise, he wakes up in a bed that's not his own, in a room that's not his own and with members of an alien species that are not of his own. He soon finds himself in a slew of events that leads to the end of Equestria itself, with him stuck in the dead center of it.

Why did the meteor crash into Equestria? Where did the storm come from, and why does it seem like its getting worse? Why aren't the Pegasus ponies controlling the weather? And what are the Royal Sisters' opinions about all this?

But the one question Griffin is asking himself is,

Will he ever be able to get back home?

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A HiE (Human in Equestria) story.

Rated Teen for lots of swearing that occurs starting chapter 1, imagery and light violence.

Heads up, the human character will NOT become a pony in this story.

Chapters "Prologue" through "Journey" in progress to be re-written!

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Comments ( 60 )

Be aware of trolls that puts bad scores, i think its a great history

I must say, ol' chap, I'm really enjoying this fic so far. :moustache:
Keep it up.

Ponies be foolin around?:pinkiegasp:

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Scratch what I said earlier, I will compile all the parts AFTER I'm finished the entire story. :pinkiesmile:

thats suck for him AND her.
there's a freaking storm aoutside my house right now too
coincidence... or destiny?
no one will ever know....

Waiiiit is she just gonna up and leave Spike all alone???!! BUUULLSHIT! That's child abandonment!! WTF! Seriously?:twilightangry2:

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Uhh, crap. I may have left that detail out.

She was simply going to get her friends first, then go back to the library to pick up Spike. No sane mare would allow a baby dragon to go out in such bad weather!

Jeez, I'm gonna have to figure out how to make that clear in the chapter...

Oh thank god I was about to call CPS. :pinkiehappy:

oh my sweet celestia i love this story :rainbowlaugh:

SPIKE SPIIKEE!!!OHH SPIKE!!!! I cant seem to find spike anywhere??? I'm gonna read this next chapter and u better explain this!!!:trixieshiftright:

:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright: The CMC, Spike, Angel BUNNY, Tank, Winoa, Owilicious, Peewee, Opalesence, Gummy?? What about them, are they gonna lead a caravan out of Ponyville???!!

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Don't worry, you'll find out what happens to Spike soon enough. ;)

As for the other characters...

The pets are not planned to be in the main plot. If anything, they will be a small tidbit somewhere in the future. You also won't get to see the CMC together, but Applebloom and Sweetie Belle will certainly come in sooner or later...

nice chapter! I can't wait for another one :yay:

good chapter! :pinkiesmile: cant wait for more .! it really good story.

oh dear i don't think this won't end well-

Oh boy i get to through griffin a party!

Wait a second..PINKIE STOP INTERUPTING MY COMMENTS:flutterrage:

this is how I celebrate
*clear throat then inhales deeply*
:yay:yay

You know what you should do. Screw life. Why get a life when you have too much?! My product LIFE AWAY is sure to keep those pesky events away.... and add more time to your writing :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: Or would you rather we lock you up in a cabin with a typewriter making you finish the story?:pinkiecrazy:

Well shit's judt gone to shit now, hasnt it?

1437110 Hehe knew you'd laugh at it :derpytongue2:
Oh, and he's not going to become a pony is he?
Cos that's where you might lose me :(

Ghaw-lee.
The Cakes are a little racist, either that or they're easily spooked

Doesn't become a pony, thank God for that. Right, I'll read H.P. Lovecraft's 'Call of Cthulhu' and then get right on to reading this. I'll edit this comment I'm a day or so with my feedback, good luck with the rest of the story!

1710026 Alright, finished it! I think you've got a fairly good story going on here, certain parts such as filler chapters can be a little dull but I understand perfectly why they're there. The characters don't seem particularly OOC which is an obvious plus, however I do find it weird that Twilight hasn't told the princess about Griffin (stupid name by the way :ajbemused:) Lastly, good luck with future chapters!

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Thank you very much!

Just be warned, personally I think that the prologue isn't that good. :derpytongue2:

I know i need to re-write it, but PROCRASTINATION.

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Cool. Thanks for your input!

And don't worry about the magic thing, the story won't touch upon it for a while.

Oh, but I gotta ask... How is the story as a whole?

why is there no comments? found this story this morning cant wait to catch up.

why is this happening you ask? well for the plot of the story of course.

for now....MWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHaa

....Rainbow.....hey...rainbow......fuck you

Did I ever tell you guys I hate rainbow?
She's SO FUCKIN STUPID.
GOOD LORD!

I tried to change the story description to mention Griffin into the story. I dunno if it's just me, but I feel like my story's not getting the views it needs. Whatever, I'm just going to leave the mention of the human in the description, just to experiment and see whether or not the view count changes in the next few updates.

You said you were gonna turn the parts into one big part when this was over right?
So what happened?

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I actually decided not to, because it would take a lot of time and would delete the view count on parts that I would have to get rid of to make one whole chapter, thus reducing my total view count. I found this out the hard way when I made the prologue one entire chapter. For a reason I cannot put my finger on, this bothers me, so I don't want to mash up any chapters until I'm done the ENTIRE story.

2412010WHAAASS GYGYUUUUUDDD NYYYUUUUGGGAAAAA??!?!?!?!

Is there gonna be a part where Griffin gets overpowered and fights a guy who shits himself at how much power Griffin gives off because the magic blast hand on fire thing at the start sort of hinted towards that

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