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SpiralWriter


Spiral really has no idea what they're doing and they hope you like what you're reading.

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Luna has always known the tale of Hearth's Warming Eve, considering she was alive when the events transpired, but can she become accustomed to the modern day traditions that now revolve around the holiday?

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Comments ( 55 )

1715393 Delete that, the mods are gonna get on my ass about it.

Because I'm their biggest problem, not the broken feature box or the crapfics that get though.

1715412 Dunsparce thinks he's going to become something on this site such as you and somepony will at once be asking "Where's Dunsparce?"

...I tell Dunsparce that he's crazy.

1715419 Oh boy, I'm becoming a trend.

Just remember, I was here first.

Well, this seems interesting.
You have my attention. :moustache:

Well.

That was . . . good. Funny and touching and all-around good.

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This is awsome:rainbowkiss:
More please :pinkiesmile:

1715570 I agree--I'd like to find out what happens. :twilightsmile:

That poor department-store Santa may take months to get over this, though.... :rainbowlaugh:

This i approve!

1715570
Ohh! So cute spike!! :yay:

1715887 What? Dunsparce is this user! Since he has no hands, I, Cannonbolt, write his thoughts for him.
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1715903 *watches the joke fly over Dunsparce's head like an airplane....a paper airplane....*

lol

but back on topic, kickass story and I'm faving nd watching it nao

Great read and humorous in a feel-good form of way. :yay:

I was also wondering: anybody got tips on how to get more people to read your story? I've had a ponified LOTR story going on for 3 months, and I hate the agonizing slow pace of readers checking on my story.

1716111
Add it to some groups, that might help.

we await the confrontation between Luna and this Santa Hooves

Luna! Don't lick that...! *SLURP* ...giant, freezing cold candy cane...

WEWEASH THEH WOYAL TONG A' WONTH, FOU CAHNDY CANE BEATHT!



(And many giggles were had)

1716113 Thanks for the idea :twilightsmile:...I guess I've never considered that option :twilightblush:

I love it too. Will there be another chapter?

This is adorable. And funny. This is adorably funny, and I love it! :pinkiehappy:

1717467
Yes, I'm going to update all through December.

I like this, but you may wish to get an editor. I noticed a number of minor mistakes like typos and having two different characters talk without a paragraph break. Other than that, neat!

Okay not earthshattering but still a good read

"We have had fun before...we did not enjoy it."

That started me laughing, and I didn't quit until the end. When she yanked that poor Mall Santa Hooves out and denounced him in front of all the children...I had to go into another room, I was laughing so hard. :trollestia: :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Posted on thee birthday, MUST READ

This is really cute; I love a good light-hearted holiday story. And you have a really well-written Luna in it to boot! :twilightsmile:

couldent stop laughing when luna sat on santa's lap.

Anyone else expecting the Santa Hooves to be a transformed Celestia? Or am I just that much of a Grinch? :trixieshiftleft:

I think this could work pretty well as an actual episode.

Also, love The Grinch reference :pinkiehappy:

1790801 I got that feeling too, lol. :derpytongue2:
1792803 Ditto! Another Luna-centered epi, mixed in w/ holiday goodness! :rainbowkiss:

Aw, so sweet! :twilightsmile:

Loved this fanfic from beginning to end. A very adequate reading for the holidays. Good job! :pinkiesmile:

This story fills me with a warm, fuzzy fealing inside. Its a sweet story, and put a smile on my face. Thank you for such a wonderful tale. :twilightsmile::heart:

Well didn't find this story till now but this was truly fantastic. Totally felt like it could be an episode of the show without any alterations which makes it all the more impressive. Truly a masterful story throughout. Excellent job and thanks so much for sharing!

That's a good way to end it.

Okay, did anypony else think of Elf when Luna exposed "Santa Hooves"? Also, the mental image of Princess Luna sitting on Santa Hooves' lap is both hilarious and adorable!:pinkiesmile:

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