Sequel to Zap Apple Jam (TwiMac ship)
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Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/59922/Zap-Apple-Jam
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Twilight and Big Mac have been married for years now, and have produced a filly named Sparkling Apple, or "Sparks" for short. Sparks is finishing her last year of Pony High and is about to graduate to marehood. But as she is spending her last months in school, a colt suddenly falls into her life. Litterly. He falls. From the roof. Onto her head. Thus how she finds herself in the hospital with him for a few days, where they start a friendship that they realize should have existed ages ago, considering the fact they have been in the same classes since they started school so many years ago. But right as this friendship begins to blossom between the two, Sparks world suddenly explodes into chaos. What do I mean? Well, you will just have to find out for yourself.
Classic romance plot with a SERIOUS twist in the first few chapters. I poured my heart into this story, so I hope you enjoy! Criticism is appreciated as long as it is HELPFUL. If my story sucks, tell me.
Special thanks to Creed Miles for basic concept, while I made the plot I wouldn't have written a sequel had he not had the idea for one about TwiMac's foals. Thanks bro!
Awwwww .... and poor Twilight
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No she was sevearly injured and it caused her to become blind in one eye.
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:3
Ouch and just curious, who is the father of Red?
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Thats another story. I will get to that after this one.
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Bravo. This is trilogy, First TwiMac, then this story, then a Applein. Figure out what Applein is and you rule.
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Yup ;)
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Coming tommorrow probably, I'm trying to improve my writing style. More time = better quality chapters.
Promise I'm working on it guys,I'm really busy
You're pretty good. Now, as for AJ's husband.... The two most popular stallions to ship AJ with are Caramel and Soarin. I'm guessing it's not Caramel, so, it must be Soarin. Right?
Nice.
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you said
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This was a fun start. And maybe you should add the Alternate Universe tag on since it seems Twilight is still a unicorn.