If a tire was on fire during a blizzard, would you stay close to it and keep warm, or run from the awful smell?
Overall, life is pretty good for Applejack. Only the general taxes and lack of sales bother her most of the time.
Braeburn asks Applejack to come help on Appleoosa's orchard, but he also mentions some issues around town.
Applejack accepts his request, but may find more problems there than she needed...
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LOL FURST DO I GET A COOKIE!?!?!??!?!
If you don't delete this comment before posting the story I am going to flash freeze you so quickly that your rectum will explode, causing feces to fly everywhere, covering your internal organs, causing your liver to defecate and eventually stink so much that your stomach hangs itself with the small intestine, letting out spews of hydrochloric acid that melt through your skin until you eventually melt completely and all that's left will be a floating shell of ice, wondering why it didn't delete this comment.
Kody, this is absolutely wonderful. It's so very immersive and emotional. The level of detail is astounding -- I can feel, hear, taste, smell, see EVERYTHING. I cannot wait to read more.
After Literature does his pre-read, let me know and I'll help you with a few things before you submit it.
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rofl
This is where I make the comment of the 14th of November being a Wednesday, right?
Other than that, I thought that this was an amazing chapter, and I can't wait to read more soon
1706241 Umm...wut?
6TH
1704199>>1706241>>1705890 Cheaters.
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On a side note. I see your comments on EVERY story I've read. Not sure if I should laugh or be creeped out.
I don't even need to read the first chapter.
Applejack is my favorite pony!
1718373 Doesn't matter, Octavia played awesome music.
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YES YOU DO.
DO IT.
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Later.
Equestrian Earth needs work!
First thing's first - end of second chapter, it's the 'brake', not the 'break' ~
Secondly, this is a first impression of a normal joe, with no english qualifications to properly judge this. That being said, you're doing a really good job of painting a nice, mental picture. Something that I'm still working on myself. As far as plot goes, it's too soon for me to say anything relevant, considering it's still a work in progress. Wonder where you're gonna go with it next
All in all, I was able to spot a few errors here and there, but nothing that distracted me. Keep up the good work ~
2421767 I just read over this story a few hours ago.
I realized that the first two chapters were TERRIBLY written compared to my newer stories! (the next chapter is actually likely to come out today!)
2421775 HE LIED!