I didn't sign up for this. I never wanted to kill anybody, I just wanted to serve the Empire. Is that so wrong? Why did this have to happen to me? I don't... I ... I never wanted this!
But I guess that's the price I pay.
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Uhh... That was random.
... That's really all I can say.
nice
Umm, okay? It was a little sporadic(trust me I know fast and sporadic, just go read my fic ;)), but the theme was nice. Your word choice defiantly painted the location and mood in my head, but the characterization was funny, we didn't really get to see why he would worry about death or why Apple Jack was the only person who found him. If she really was a Lieutenant, don't you think she would up at the front lines, leading her forces. Don't think i'm bashing you or anything, I truthfully enjoyed it. If you ever need a pre reader, I'm here for you bro
1693627 Thanks man!
This one-shot is directly linked to another story I'm working on called The Plainwalkers. In hindsight I probably shouldn't have uploaded this one first, but I did so for two reason.
1. It was kinda annoying having only one fiction to my name.
B. I wanted to try my hand at something different, and see how well I could write something that was meant to be emotional.
In regards to your offer to pre-read. Well, I mean if you really want to, I won't say no, but I won't pressure you into it either. It's your call man, but I'd gladly take any help I can get.
1695577Don't worry about this "pressure", I offered, so I'll follow through. And now that you cleared that all up, it makes more sense!! And don't worry about having only one fiction, I only have one (and a pretty bad one at that. It needs some MAJOR TLC) it's nothing to be ashamed about
Well done. Gave me the feels.