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TheSilentAuthor


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Prince Sombra has just inherited the crystal empire from his late Father. The young Prince is grief stricken but tries to find happiness in his dark times. Having the Grand Galloping Gala going on in Canterlot seems like the best place to go for a good time. Upon arriving he surprise to see the reason why his family never went to these sort of things. Many believe that this is the last Gala that King Dawnbreaker will be alive for. His two daughters Celestia and Luna are suspected to be have begun training in the art of raising the day and night. With the entertainment of the evening being a barbaric circus run by slaves, Sombra tries to save the performers afterwards from their life of misery. He fails to safe them all but he does manage to save one. A young changeling. Taking her away and inserting her into his daily life, she soon becomes a close friend to him. Eventually Sombra starts to feel that there is something more between them. What fallows is a tale of passion which leads to many changes in the life of the young prince. Sombra spirals down the path of blind love not caring what may happen.
"Love can sometimes blind us to reason. Which leads to insanity."

Chapters (21)
Comments ( 54 )

Like the story so far excellent work.

2378387 Thanks, glad you are enjoying it

i really like this so far

2461465 Well I am glad you are enjoying it and thanks for favoring it.

Like a small philly
Filly you spell it with a f
P:S really like this story

2467144 Thanks, corrected it sorry about that my computer has an autocorrect feature and I usaly don't pay attention when it make corrections glad you are enjoying it

Soon King Sombra will rule instead of Prince Sombra!!!

I'm surprised this doesn't have more views! It's very well done, though there is the occasional error, it doesn't detract from the story. Very well done! I'm looking forward to more!

Quite an enjoyable chapter.

2589323 Thank you, yes there are some errors here and there but hey we all
make those sometimes. Thank you liking it and more is on its way.

This is an interesting idea, but it could use a little editing.

Well that's very impolite of Mezzo's wife. Great chapter! I can't get enough of this story.

Well I found that to be quite an eventful chapter.

3208935 Maybe. Currently writing something else but I might write something to follow this up one day.

Great job. I usually prefer happier endings but that was a great story. 5 starts, or at the very least 4 and a half. If you make a squeal that'd be even better. ^____^

3606849 I still tossing an idea around for a sequel. Once I get done with this other story am writing I might start brainstorming. Glad you liked it.

3209347>>3208935

Well in that case. YAY! And I look forward to it. ^____^

Problem 1: They kidnapped the QUEEN of the changelings. 2: you once said Tai instead of Tia. That is all. otherwise you have a wonderfully made story. :pinkiesmile:

What badassery! I hang my head in shame for thinking that ALFRED! Of all people was the most awesome butler ever! :ajsleepy:

OMIGOD!!!! This almost sounds exactly like a fanfic I once read! IT IS BEAUTIFUL!!! :pinkiegasp: (By the way it was a Vegeta x Bulma fic so you probably wouldn't know it.)

3903124 Thank goodness you had me worried there for a second. Also I am glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for pointing out errors. I am not ashamed when people point them out, it gives me a chance to fix future mistakes.

Two words. My precious. >:D

I know this is supposed to be a dark chapter but,..... your spelling errors were so hilarious I couldn't help but laugh! XD

2589323 It may not distract from the story but it's sure hecka' hilarious! :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild::derpytongue2:

sombra's so kind in this story...XD love it!!!:rainbowkiss::twilightsmile::derpytongue2:

Really liked the story and loved the interaction between Chrysalis and Sombra. Though the deus ex machina and the spelling errors were annoying.

5420025 I am glad you like the story, and I know that there are still many errors that I have made along the way. I have been trying to set some time aside to go back and correct these but haven't gotten around to it yet. Thank you for taking the time to read my story.

It was good, Are you going to do a sequel?

5657130 eh probably not, been working hard on another story for a while now and I kind of wanted to leave this one open ended. I do intend to go back and re edit this story though.

White unicorn noooooo Sombras Gray

I always though those two went well with each other. They're sort of like the reflection of cadence, and S.A. Two sides of the same coin, and so on and so forth.

6053471 Huh, the more I think about them like that it the more it makes sense. Thanks for the fav and I hope you enjoyed the story.

6054335 I did, the ending was nice. Perhaps you'd be interested in checking out my story.

This story was Amazing! One of the best.

Wow, this story is amazing!:pinkiegasp: I love, love , love it!:heart: excellent work. :twilightsmile:

7568163 Thank you very much for the kind words

we need a sequel !!!

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