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Their Final Stand.

7 years after fighting discord, the six brave
element wielding ponies might have to sacrifice their lives this time to save equestria after
an other ancient evil know as Metanite Destroys Ponyville and kills hundreds.
but will the elements defeat Metanite or will they fail?

Chapters (3)

Evil is on the Horizon · 9th Jan 2012 · 1,361 words
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The long journey ahead · 21st Jan 2012 · 1,261 words
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3 weeks later... · 29th Jan 2012 · 855 words
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TheBlackPanda

TheBlackPanda #1 · Jan 9th, 2012 · · · Evil is on the Horizon ·

A couple of things. One, don't bold/italicize the quotes when characters speak. Also, don't start a new paragraph everytime they speak, start a new paragraph after they speak. Don't double space inbtween new paragraphs. One press on the 'enter' key will do. You also rushed everything a little. Expand on it some more.
Other than that, interesting. I'll track it! I'm curious to see where this is gonna go!

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