While escaping a night of partying, Vinyl Scratch quietly lets loose in Ponyville. Privately relaxing behind Sugar Cube Corner, Vinyl notices a cross-eyed mare.
Vinyl steals the pony away to discover her name, and to find a way to gain her complete trust.
Learning the past of the pegasus just might hit the heart of the laid-back DJ.
Derpy's coat is more of a grey than a blue :p
great start though.
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Your avatar has changed; I don't know what's real or fake anymore!
1670290 Kurt's busy with a show, so I, Sexy Lyra, am filling in for today and tomorrow.
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So... Everything will be back to normal in a few days? I think I have enough food in the pantry to survive until this blows over.
1670315 Hey, I got a banana right here to share with you...
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Well, I would have to leave my kitchen to do that... Or would I?
In other news, this chapter was too short for me to decide how good this is, but the fact that I can't outright say it's bad is already good news. You also get one-point-six points for being the first person I've ever seen call Ditzy "light blue." If the worst mistake you make in a fic is the color of somebody, your probably doing pretty good.
I always thought she was a light blue, but alright. I will have to fix that to grey
Yay! Update!
I'm about to work on the third chapter in a moment
So cute I love the pairing, and your writing is done well. Can't wait for the next chapters!
Thank you! I like the pairing as well, I'm not sure why, but I think it's just too adorable Hope you will read the rest
Poor Derpy! (Her 'real' name is Ditzy)
I know...but I always call her Derpy...I think it suits her better
Erma gerd dis is so kool where's octavia???
Octavia will not be in this story. But after this one I am writing one about Vinyl and Octavia
Wow!!!YES YES. For a second i thought u turned it into a clopfic i was getting ready for some vinyle on derpy action. Best way to end it thoe. Great job bro!!!
I'm not much of a clopfic writer haha! But thanks anyways! It's still not completely over yet
ok... wierd thing happened... I pressed the downvote thing, when I pressed the Upvote, I'm sorry!
It's okay
is that really the end?
Yes I wanted the end to be one of those....I need more! Kind of endings
Plus I thought it needed a sweet and simple ending. I don't feel Derpy is the pony up for a full fledged romance. A bitter sweet friendship fits it best. That is how I feel anyways I do hope you enjoyed it though, even if it didn't meet your full expectations, and I apologize for any disappointment
OUCH! Friend-zoned!
Yep! That sucks sometimes, but it's okay Vinyl is going to get her romance with Octavia in my next fic! Hope you check it out!
Good job.
Thank you
ehh it was ok but the ending made sense
Thanks
Hm. I think I prefer stories with Derpy as a much more intelligent pony. Good story though.
1782803 It's not that she's unintelligent, it's just she's very high-spirited, and kind of ditzy of course
GAH!! Why did I let this story lay in my "Read Later" box for so long? This is really good I actually kind of like how there isn't quite a "relationship" between them Really good work
1901259 I'm glad you liked it! And I thought that it was best they didn't. I just don't see Derpy as being the relationship type
this story is ADORABLE
2779121 Glad to hear it