I believe it but I don't understand.
Discord had escaped and planned on getting revenge by murdering luna. However his method is rather odd.
He sent her to, As he puts it: "the most dangerous ,cruel and inhospitable planet in the universe".
This planet was more commonly known as "earth".
What discord did not plan for however was the presence of a young, lonely brony living out his life one day at a time.
And when he finds and promises to help luna, discord is not amused.
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Mmm, Interesting Concept.
I'll be watching.
i give you 1 soup can
I'll give you a like and favorite, but just as a heads up you should watch out for that capitalizing in the middle of a sentence...
Seems like a good story so far though... will be watching.....
1692438 Watching... and waiting...
1695391Wont be necessary.
Chapter 3 is in development.
Will post asap.
Moars must have Moars
Technically your I's are supposed to be capitalized ...
The story is good so far but you might look into getting an editor. Sometimes its little things like capitalization that are the difference between an upvote and a downvote.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
¡¡¡¡¡¡WE DEMAND MOAR!!!!!
Great update
Half of my brain wants to kill me for reading this, but the other half is preparing to kill the other half for treason, so it's all good.
You sir, earned a valued reader.
Thanks for all the comments guy's.
2 days till School's done for me. I'll be much more active in terms of updates.
Till next time.
HOLY SHIIIIIT
Like everything
Except yolo I fucking hate yolo
Only two problems with this story:
1. You want to capitalize names of places, as well as use commas at the end of dialogue and use apostrophe marks when it comes to contracted words.
2. Not enough Luna yet. Make more Luna. NOW.
Other than that, the premise is genius and your writing is a fluid, carrying sort. I love it.
Not bad, the capitalization in this chapter was a lot better than the rest.
Don't forget to capitalize your I's though.
to me this is the reference no it is the reference.....i'll fucking kill you......Jk! lol
difference is
i spot that rather easily...
awsome i want more.!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wombo wombowings WOMBO
It's a cool story but it's rather simple.
1874409 Don't worry. The simplicity will fade away pretty soon.
I have some ideas floatin' around.
Waiting.. the boring part of reading fanfics.
^^ so true my friend
More please c:?
Edit: First comment! Yay c:
too bad that ended so quickly i was enjoying it
cool story.
still think its a cool story, and im typing this from my bathroom at 1 am.
Not bad! The punctuation is a lot better than it used to be!
Question: Is the voice in Alec's head his own?
I'm assuming it is since I don't believe Luna would know any memes.
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Yes, He's not insane.
Not yet.
It takes skill not to lose it when one find's themselves in the presence of their favourite pony.
He seems to be taking it pretty well though.
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*Chuckles*.......
*Begins to cackle* .....
*Moves to dark laughing*
*Begins to roar with furious maniacal laughter!*
*Is now screeching with absolutely insane laughter!!*
*Clears throat* Oops,
Got a little excited there..
Driving with Luna in broad daylight.. Yup 'totally not' going to get caught.
awsome story mike explain to me why you read storys about me with me standing RIGHT HERE 2 reasons luna first its fun 2nd this is a good story i thought you would like it well... it is nice to be liked by so many po- i mean people but i must ask most storys you read have me as a main character..... are you hiding something from me mike nope idk what your taking about hehe. but i think you do w- what are you doing in my personal space im............ giving you a hug why what did you think i was doing umm nothing nothing at all hehe
i could not stop laughing when he said yolo nice
!
1943254
Pehaps....
But When carrying valuable cargo, one tends to get creative when it comes to hiding...... or disguising top secret alicorns.
1949142
Brilliant!!!
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Thanks
(still hugging) sooooo sooooooo what now i dont know well how about we let go of eachother first then decide from there yea ok IDEA~ what is it lets go star gazing really!!!! yea i always liked the stars and the night time (in my mind)>i think im forgetting something (she latches on to me in a bear hug and flies outside still hugging) in mind>oh yea she is the princess of the night,moon and stars. thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you can you let me go now so we can enjoy this night? oh im sorry i dont know what came over me its fine luna
Whaaaa?
Anyways, great chapter as always, soooo cute!
1962324 Little sister best friend forever. The first thing that came into my mind was LSD.
Anyways, great chapter once again. Your grammar has clearly improved, which I'm glad about. Keep on rolling, good sir.
1963803 I was more confused about
1963920 Aaaaaah, my bad.
He probably meant older than when she was a filly.
1963923 OOOH! Dang I just got it
for some reason I thought he meant that Twilight was older than Shining Armor... Silly me.
Guess that's also what I get for staying up till 1 a.m
SOUP LABELS READ THEM IT WILL HELP
Good Story
My only request is to keep humanity-pony interactions to a minimum (hopefully none at all apart from the two Friends)
My first and second Favorite ponies Fluttershy and Luna.
AWSOME
hehe, good chapter :)
So cute ;-; , I love it. ;-; Words cannot express how much i LOVE this
I hope they get to Equestria soon. The longer they stay on earth the higher the chance of things going to hell. I also kinda want to see the ponies reaction to Luna coming back with a boy(Stallion)friend.
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Oh please
They aint together yet... Luna was just "cold"
I'll take the romance nice'n sloooooooow. I've seen what happens when romance is rushed... Quote "Choo - choo" unquote.
Rest assured. It'll all be brought to light in time.
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I'v gotta say your grammar has gotten a lot better. lol
And I definitely DON'T like it when it goes 'Oh look a pony, MAKE OUT WITH MEH'.
It irks me.
You should go back and edit your beginning chapter... Not for content, but all the grammar mistakes turn a lot of people off to a story.