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OH MY GOD YOU ARE FUCKING!!!!!! Let me help you
This colpfic...made my day. I salute you!
Also, Archvile cooked something for you:
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Can I haz it?
1662823 I dunno...ask Steve if he has anyhing.
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Cacodemon: What do you think I am, a moving restaurant?
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?!?!..... Tell Steve I said hi
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Well fuc-OH my god!
1662856 Well i can help you with the revenge!
* Later at night*
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That woulda' teach him!
Awewe i like it
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Raw?
Oh holy shit
Very interesting, I think that I would like to see more from you. I would like also to see a fic with maybe more of the older mares or even Spike or Big Mac.
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Thank you very much for the input, darling~ Keep an eye out for my new stories, I might just include your idea
That goes for all of you dears! Leave a comment or PM with your idea~
Wow.. This is.... awesome....
Not what I expected. I'm not really sure I expected anything, but still. Do it again, with different ponies! PLEASE?!?!
Be your best friend!
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I will be sure to take into account that you liked the way this one is put together... watch for more.
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On it.
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“This is how yer s’posed to do it!”
Best line ever!!!
Oh i sure had a great laugh, this is gold right here. Keep it up!
...and that's how our weekend went.
Sigh... No matter how much I try, I just can't like this...
It lacked in description of pretty much everything. The characterization was very stiff
and made the characters seem inanimate.
So yeah, sorry, but no likes from me.
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Thank you for the feedback.
I don't blame you for not liking it but I do wish that you don't give up on me and look at my other stories when they come out.
Omg. They really told miss cheerilee?!
Pretty light on the description and feeling, which made the story a bit too mechanical. Some grammar issues, but nothing that a good editor or pre-reader shouldn't catch for you.
Other than that, it was an interesting story idea, and I liked that the girls weren't just somehow natural pros. Most writers forget that somepony's first time is kind of awkward, and halting as you learn from the experience.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Sweetie_happy.png
I'll keep an eye out for future stories from you and I hope to see you learn and refine your writing as well
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1662845 for some reason that guy makes me think of Quake
EDIT:>< just got the name
Cheerilee: There... what... I don't...girls...
Either that, or considering the way things work in *this* universe...
Cheerilee: No no no, girls, let me show you how an EXPERT does it...
that last line...
Just alright. I've read better clops about the cmc. Like others have mentioned, a bit too mechanical and little backstory or characterization.
Alright i have to say i was a bit leary on if you were going to make my sweet heart sweetie belle in there awkward with AppleBloom and scoots but when sweetie belle and AJ were doing it i just had to favorite it!!
Omfg! Poor mrs. Cheerilee!!!
I... I did it. I found a clopfic that I can comment on before Regidar did. Well, since he hasn't said it, I will....
I came.
I liked it. I don't know how i feel after rarity and apple jack demonstrated ... where they did each others sisters and everything else that followed. I liked how they all got lingerie though and at the very end when show and tell ended the story... it was arousing actually. Despite having insinuated incest.
Lol I'm gonna do a dramatic reading about this later on in the future, that was funny. Nice twist in the middle!
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Well, it is an extracurricular lesson about what could (I suppose) be considered a special type of friendship... so instead of reporting to Cherilee, they might report to Celestia
oh no Cheerrilee you need bleach for your eyes and ears
What did I just read?!!!!!!!!!!
Good... No incest. Wouldn't want that, would we?
2386839 that was my worry too
And this is awesome! Ooo! Next time pinkie with rainbow and the cake twins in the future! ... I may do that...
The CMC then proceed sing their own version of 'i had sex'
So much trouble 5he cmc are in
"Awwww Sheeeeeeit, CAUGHT!!!!"
"Wait why is there still a bunch more space on the screen...?"
"The fuck??"
"Oh, Gawd!"
*Continues to read*
"JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!!!"
“Sorry,” Sweetie said innocently, “w-w-we didn’t know we were doing anything wrong...”
“Well, ya’ll were,” Applejack scolded, looking on with a look of harsh disappointment. The Cutie Mark Crusaders hung their heads.
“This is how yer s’posed to do it!” she finished, her face lighting up. She hopped onto the bed. “Come on Rarity, let’s show’m.” She bounced a little.
“Wait, I need to go for a second, I have the perfect outfits for this
Pft, the best part is when aj said"This is how yer s'posed to do it.
6462599 i concure
Read it, no regrets. PLZ MAKE MORE CMC CLOPFICS!!!
Cheerilee: "Well... class, it sounds like these three girls learned an important lesson, one which you're all going to need to know this in the future. In fact, since we have extra time today, why don't you girls give the class a demonstration. Since there are three of you, I'm going to join in, just to make it an even number. Pay attention class, because I'm going to be quizzing you individually in the future."
Cheerilee's thoughts: Boy, after hearing them talk about their new pleasure, I really need a rub, and these are just the foals to give me one.
8987187 This needs to be the sequel! I would so read this! It sounds so hot!
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Well, if foals getting fucked in class turns you on, I recommend you read the story "Sex Ed: Changeling Style" by Dirty Little Secret. It's the best!
9306295 Ate you sure you're not thinking of this story? I love this story!
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Yes, but I didn't want to link it, as I'm pretty sure linking NSFW webpages are against Da Rules (even if you're linking one mature story in the comments of another mature story). Then again, I haven't read Da Rules in a long time, so I could be wrong.
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