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Called it.
Nice story so far bit I don't like that romance tag
1662658 agreed
1662658 Why not?
1664360 weeeeeell, see it like this. if you are thinking about what I think that you are thinking than see it like this. how are it going to work out. he is a giant robot out for destruction and shes a little pony. it would be like a bear dating a bird for crying out loud. you got a great story line so far. don't screw it up
1664375 Do not worry my friend Ill make it work. In fact I have plan, but be patient. Without the whole romance part there would be no story, Rainbow Dash would just be a carcass with a giant hole right through her body. I dont plan on making it too sappy, there will be a story with action but with romance on the side.
1664440(in deep thought) hmm, that actually sounds promising. just don't make any...dirty stuff okay. uhh, bad image in my head.
1664463 I assure you I dont do stuff like that. Just quality stories and fight scenes.
1664479 mlkshk.com/r/IDOH
no kill here do starscream do it for me or cybertron or well every decpticon fan out there
1668479 Uhm could u rephrase that? Maybe in english?
just kill her
1668567 Why? Im trying to help unite the two series not cause more reason for people to hate the other.
ok but remember violence helps sometimes
And there will be plenty of that.
And to quote my Xcom soldiers "DAMN IT SHOT WIDE!". I can't have been the only one to think that.
Signed the good dr.
Update it plz want more awsome!
UPDATE!
don't leave us hanging. finish the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOOO Rainbow!
NEED MOAR! 
lol romance... 
1668479 NO. just NO
3893063 I was confused about that too.
3893187 This story is so good, I NEED more, this story easily makes it to my 'story of the week' list. Part of me is mildly weird-ed out out by the romance between such bitter rivals (Star scream and Rainbow) but at the same time, the part of me that is weird-ed out is also shouting "MORE!" and the other part of me is the part that goes completely INSANE until there is more. No pressure, or anything, this is just my way of telling you that i really, really, really, REALLY like this story.
A friend of mine is a Transfan (transformers fan) but not a Brony. he knows I'm a Brony, and I'm trying to convert him. i told him about this story, and he REALLY liked the ending. (guess why) When i first read this story, I was like 
but then i was like 
and then i was like 
and then, at the very end i was like 
LOL
translation: I really like your story
1668840 is your avatar a picture of Derpy riding Dinobot? (transformers: Beast wars)
3897507 I think its just a raptor my friend sent it to me
3897615 ah. theres one picture of Dinobot (in robot form) riding Princess Luna. My non-Brony friend saw that, and cried. (almost) bacause Dinobot is his favorite character, mine too. LOL
3897623 I've conversed with the artist of that piece. Dinobot is one of my favorites. Thank you for the kind words about my story. I didnt think it would have that much of an impact. I originally posted it as a one-shot on fanfiction.net and had the stupid idea of continuing it here. I scrapped that idea and remained it as a one-shot but maybe I'll come back to it in the future.
3897832 I hope so. My sanity depends on it.
3897832 Also, I have actually been reading stories here for a few weeks, but once I read this one, I snapped, and I finally made an account, so I could unload all the comments I have been storing up (since I couldn't post them before)
3897850 Well I am happy to find out I played a part in getting you to make an account! Are you going to upload any stories?
3897864 Maybe. If I did, it would be the first legitimate story I have ever written ever, and I'm a closet Brony, so it would be hard to secretly write an entire fanfiction (don't get me wrong, I could, it would just take a while) and even if I did, it would probably be a one-shot... but... maybe...
3897890 Go for it!
3897892 Maybe... But I still have to come up with a story...
3897892 How about this: If you promise to continue this story - soon - I will write a fanfiction (It's worth a try)
The ending was... unexpected.
Why would anyone send you hate mails?
I feel like an idiot, but i didn’t get the ending...
Can someone please explain it to me.