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JitterbugJive


Jitterbug Jive, author/artist of Discord Whooves, Lovestruck Derpy, and Doctor Whooves and Assistant. And other such things.

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My name is Sombra Lucent. I am a resident of the Crystal Kingdom, hailing from the upper class sector. I am making this journal entry to archive my recent magical studies of artifacts and our history.
For as long as our people can remember, our kingdom has been the heart of Equestria. We keep balance and harmony across the land, and take great pride in our duty. Our love is their love, say they say.
But I want to find the source of all of this. I want to discover why the Crystal chose us in this otherwise desolate tundra of cold and ice, and what effects it may have on the kingdom itself. All of this exposure to the crystal has given our coats a glorious shine, and we as the shining guardians of Equestria have been aptly named 'Crystal Ponies'. But while our role in this world is strong, we are also quite fragile in mind and in body.
I have left the kingdom, braving the snow and ice to locate answers to our past and the origins of the crystal. I also hope to find some way to improve my magic and perhaps bring new ideas and studies to what I consider an otherwise crumbling society. They need a leader, they need to stop with their dreams of a crystal princess because in all this time of waiting and legend, there has never been one present among us. She is just a bed-time story for foals at this point, and I refuse to accept the praise and reliance on something that simply isn't there.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 26 )

That picture. The art style looks disturbingly familiar but i dunno... *marks to read later*

1652828 askdiscordedwhooves.

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I'm certain it would. Look at the author's name.

It could do without the pictures at each chapter.
We're here to read, bro. We need to see his descent into madness WITH THE POWER OF WORDS.

1652837>>1652842 ...Excuse me while I go bang my head against a wall for an hour. Still going to read and enjoy though. I will always enjoy stories.:rainbowdetermined2:

wow that is awesome:pinkiehappy: faved and liked

Very enjoyable read.

Heya Jitter. <3 Thanks for posting this here!

Dafuq is that last sentence?

This was interesting, but I think we're missing someone in the comments.

The corruption! The madness! It's glorious! I love how much depth you've added onto a otherwise flat character. As far as I'm concerned this is cannon as to how Sombra became the way we know him. It makes perfect sen- wait. The book Princess Luna had... Oh gawd. It all makes sense now.

Oh yeah, and I like your pictures.

FAVED AND LIKED ON ARTWORK AND CONCEPT.

I love a true descent into madness and corruption!
I predict a feature :raritywink:
Also, this has become head-canon for me, been trying to think of a good way for Sombra to get these powers...

Interesting, though the chapters are far too short, watching Sombra go from obsessive scholar, to violent tyrant, to ranting loony.

Ah, you beautiful bastard! it's just what I wanted!

Not gonna be surprised if this gets featured.

Very interesting story, fascinating read. And the art is amazing too!

Nice. As part of a small wager with my forum's ponythread, I have been checking out Sombra origin stories (I postulated with great cynicism that within two weeks, we would snided under with stories showing how Sombra was all sympathetic and hard done to (rather like happened with Discord and Chrysalis)). I was greatly relieved to see that this wasn't one of them, but a much more reasonable tale of how he fell (mostly his own hubris!) It cheers me greatly that sometimes the bad guys in this fandom can actually be let be the bad guys without too much prodding and corruption from outside forces! So thanks for that!

OK I just finished reading this and I have to say it was fantastic!
afew of the journal entries early on could have nee a bit more detailed but then he came across as a rather crisp and quick spoken individual so maybe not.
I loved the mystery you managed to intertwine along with the pre existing MLP lore with Tartarus the Princess's, Discord. And then to actually discuss how the magic works the changes in culture and to see him steadily go from a slightly egotistical intellectual with high ambitions and beliefs into the raging monster we saw at the end superb. I loved the hints you dropped as to what eh was ultimately working towards and the steady build up and alteration of his body through crystals and well just about everything really. including the art :pinkiehappy:
What did the last sentence mean? it cloud just be him going crazy somehtign to do with tartarus or is this some sort of cthulu esc thing or somehtign entirely original?
Anyway faved up liked!

I know I already commented but I seriously love this fic the idea of a separate new sort of magic that seems to become imbued within the wielded and could actually kill Discord as well I love it! :pinkiehappy:

Insanity is best power.

What an ending! Absolutely perfect!

1667285 I know part of it is Latin, and the last word of the sentence is pit.

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Thanks for the info :D

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