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After the unsuccessful changeling invasion of Canterlot one changeling crash lands in Sweet Apple Acres barn where he then attempts to take Appleblooms position. Things don't go exactly to plan...

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:trixieshiftright:

You have intrigued me. I will put it on my read later.

Applejack and the others got home from Canterlot reeeeaaal fast. That or the changeling was out for a long time and nopony bothere to check the barns when something crashed into it. Either way, bit of a plot hole.

I like how it's established that changelings use 'natural' magic. That was a nice touch, IMO.

1652965 well Canterlot is pretty fucking close to Ponyville, only about 5 kilometres off when you think about it. Maybe 6 kilometres. Anyway, its understandable that they would get back fairly fast.

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They were at Canterlot for much longer after Team Changeling blasted off again. At least overnight.

1653021 Oh yeah, right. OR MAYBE EVERYPONY BECAME A CHANGELING :pinkiegasp:

it does not do anything unnatural like move the flesh inside of our bodies or stitch it together with rough magic threads like some unicorns I could mention she lets out a gasp when she sees me

I'M HERE
THAT'S ALL THAT MATTERS

Eh...its all right, I'm track it, but its not worthy of a like yet. Also, go through it, its covered in forgotten full stops and forgotten capital letters.

1653181 No, I beat you, Rainbow is victorious. yes...yes!...YEEEEEEESSSS!!!!

I like the idea (I am a fan of Changeling fics) and the idea isgood,but what's happening now?
Look forward to the next chapter,and where this story goes
-Shadow Flare

plz... for the love of all that you care for... MORE!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

Interesting choice for how Twi and Co. to deal with the Changeling, leaving it somewhere in the Everfree Forest... I would love to see more, especially an explanation for why the Changeling was only exiled instead of suffering some other punishment.

Get an editor. Missing apostrophes and such, also it's "soaring through the air" not "souring".

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