Ditzy Doo is just about the best mailmare in Equestria, but nothing can prepare her for what is to come.
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I will have to read this. I'm putting it on my to do list.
Well that killed some time. Quite amusing.
Celestia and her cake...
WAT IT WAS JUST CAKE CELESTIA YOU SUCK
I lol'd.
That was a great story, and it deserves much more recognition than it received. Literally, I couldn't stop having this stupid smile through the entire thing! The jokes, the absurd reality, what, with all the ninjas, and, of course, that ending! I'm not one for happy endings, but that was genius. I'm truly sorry this didn't get more views and such because it really should've gotten more. Awesome story, though, man!
1652536 Well thank you very much.
1650726 What episode is that first GIF from?
I like. Going to re-read later its so late I can't recall much of the story.
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Season 1 Episode 18 "The Show Stoppers"
I didn't know FedEx was so interested in Equestria...
1736168 Hahaha *rolls up newspaper*
Aren't you funny?
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Come at me bro
1736186 C'mon guys be civil about this! Pies at ten paces?
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....What kind of pies?
1752759 Apples are a favourite. Maybe cherry would be better?
...uhh... .....what... what just happened here?
I mean everyone knows Ditzy's family is a long-bred line of military heroes, 
but one mare against a whole army of ninja? (yes, the plural for ninja is, in fact, ninja... get over it.) I guess that's the best part about being Ditzy Doo, you get to be spontaneous! 
And suddenly... NINJAS!!
This is the second of this kind of story that I've read regarding Ninjas and violence in the last 24 hours and I'm still filled with glee... Long live the crack(fic
)!
That was totally awesome! I want to say though, as soon as the package turned out to be cake I totally saw Trace coming to her and calling a truce, and as soon as they mentioned food I knew it was going to be the Pie Pony. Tiny bit predictable. That being said, the story was awesome.
Also, you should do some editing. I caught quite a few snags in there. If you like I can do it for you but I'm working on editing two other authors' stories at the moment so they'd come first.
A seriously enjoyable read, Derpy Hooves is my favorite pony ever in all Equestria so you know this caught my eye. Was not surprised it had a happy ending but the rest of it had me laughing my ass off. Ah, Celestia, you joker. Does not help that she's one of the rulers of Equestria and the Goddess of the Sun
But I kept thinking of Avatar the last airbender when I was reading the last fight scene, how odd. Two blades are better than one that's for sure. Amazing story, made my night. And GO. DERPY!!!!!
You can has review!