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So whaddya say?


There are those few perfect moments in life, those few moments of absolute bliss, that never come back. Too often we lose sight of those things, but no matter how long it takes, something will always be there to take you back to those days of wonder. No, it won't ever be the same, but those days will always find their way back into your mind, and you'll forget all your problems, and all you've been through, and just think back to how simple it all used to be.

Cover image used with permission and sourced appropriately. Thanks Imalou~!

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Comment posted by Regidar deleted Nov 4th, 2013

Shit this was good. Please continue.

Wait so im confused scootaloo was trying to stop being a slut?

1661656 All will be answered in time. If you care to really learn, that is.

1661446 Thanks. Means a lot coming from someone who appears to know more than a thing or two about writing.

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Comment posted by Regidar deleted Nov 4th, 2013

1662034 Oh, you flatter me. :twilightblush:
But yeah, I am definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes.

1662042 With good reason too!
I'm glad. Chapter 1 is in the works, so you shouldn't have to wait too long.

Yo, any plans to finish this? It's freakin' sweet and I would like to see more.

1902204 Don't you worry, the first chapter is in the works and doesn't need much other than a little love and care. Only reason it took so long is that i wanted to finish the next chapter of my other story "Losing Hold" before i did this one. Shouldn't be too much longer! :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by Rysonn deleted Nov 4th, 2013

I'll be reading it soon! :pinkiehappy:

2696509 Nothing to get /too/ excited about, i think you might actually be a little disappointed when you find out what this chapter's about, but don't get discouraged! I have big plans for this story!

So the stupid fimfic favorites thing decided not to notify when this chapter went up, which means I'm not getting to it 'till now, but guess what? This is still fanfreakingtastic and I can't wait for more. Your description and voice evoke a feeling of bleakness that works perfectly with story's overall tone, and I'm now more curious than ever to see how RD and her father(?) tie into the whole thing.

Keep on keeping on.

3200054 Thanks man! The next part will be up... sometime!

Short but sweet. And all the more intriguing. Very curious to see what you have planned next.

Also, just a minor thing: in the second-to-last sentence, shouldn't 'tasted' be 'taste', in keeping with the present tense?

Regardless of that, great chapter.

3303035 Thanks for feedback and the fix~<3

And the plot thickens. I swear, you make me more and more curious with every chapter.

3431320 I'm really glad you like it! Yeah, this one's a bit simple and short, but it ends up being REALLY important later on~<3

"'cause I raised you better, gotta keep it together,
even when you fall apart."

"when you fall apart."


Damn. Incredibly awesome and well written as usual, and now you've thrown another wonderfully dark characterization into the mix, piquing my interest further. I've got a soft spot for those, I really do, and you pull off bitter/broken/possessed(?) Twilight super well. Still not entirely sure where all of this is going, but I'm more than happy to be pulled along for the ride. Keep up the kickass work. :twilightsmile:

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