Pinkie Pie, the party pony, has been hearing strange things lately. Her friends are acting very strange. They keep telling her to wake up. Wake up from what?
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TheExhaustedBrony
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Nice bit of mind play in with that. Interesting, kinda sad its so short, but good job.
I am finding them quite amusing!
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3279567
Thank you!
*reads description*
I'm calling coma on this one
*reads description*
I'm calling coma on this one
3279648 :3
I'd say you pulled that ending straight out of your ass, but the cover image foreshadowed it, so you're good.
You need to add the Human tag to it.
3279713 not quite sure what to make of your comment...
3279728
I think that would ruin the surprise ending.
3279647 darn you were right I thought FOR SURE it would be like that futurama episode.....
One problem with the story
ITS A ONE SHOT *sobs*
Except Spike, for some weird reason. Oh, well, at least none of the ponies were real either.
Making me cry while drunk before going to bed.
This was fantastic and how you weaved Pinkie's rock farm past into the accident was amazing as well. I loved it
3280211 who cares about spike?
3279728 I never mention humans in the story
3280812 His friends, believe it or not.
3280981 Spike has those?
3280989 Sorry, Spike abuse isn't funny anymore. It's the only thing about FiM that makes the show hard to enjoy, and makes the fanbase hard to appreciate. It's even starting to make me hate those damn ponies.
You know. You could easily make a follow up. I'm not asking anything. Just pointing out an opportunity.
Aww, poor Pinkie. Now she has to deal with cruel reality. Worst. Wake up. Ever.
Wow. How long was that, about a thousand words? In that little patch of words, you really did an amazing job.
Though, it really does live up to the Sad tag you put on it.
Hot damn. A bit of a reality check. Poor Pinkie.
I want a sequel.
I need to know what happens next.
"It's"
3312327 like with most of the one-shots I've made for the challenge, I'm thinking on expanding them at a later date once it's over. This one is on the list of stories to continue.
I hope there's a sequel.
3280981
Considering what an asshole he was to Pinkie in Party of One (and what an asshole he is in general) it's amazing they would include him in anything they do at all. Spike fans are the biggest crybabies in the fandom. Fuck off and let us enjoy our ponies. Ponies>pussy dragons.
3579718 Nope, I'd rather enjoy a diverse cast of characters.
And my God, what hypocritical logic. Spike's hardly an asshole. If you think they would remove him from their group because he's a little inconsiderate sometimes, none of them would ever stay together! Twilight and Rarity have some pretty bitchy tendencies, Fluttershy's impossible to talk to, Pinkie's a pain in the ass... You saw How Rarity was treating Fluttershy in the last episode, right? And how Rainbow Dash treated her in Crystal Empire? And Pinkie was actually much worse to Spike than he was to her in Party of One.
If you interpret Spike fans as "crybabies", it's only because you ponyfags are so fucking obsessed with ponies that you keep shoving him off to the side and pretending the ponies feel as little affection for him as you do. From my perspective, you're the crybaby bitching and whining about not wanting a wimpy dragon messing up your precious little pony utopia. You're probably just as annoyed by Spike fans like me as I am by Spike haters like you.
Don't like my comment, which does nothing more than point out a flaw in the story? Ignore it and continue pleasuring yourself to your messed-up view of the mane cast. And if you just want to bitch, PM me next time so you don't waste space under the author's story.
3579718>>3587721
We don't need to start a flame war here. Not on my story, that's for sure.
3280211
I'm sorry. But every movie I read, /you/ are always the one mentioning Spike. Seriously, he's important, I know, but you needa chill.