Sometimes it is not the spoken word that allows one to be heard.
(Short one-shot done on the idea of speaking through silence)
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cloudedguardian
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This time guys, I've got nothing to say other than "Inspiration is such a dang finicky dog."
Hope you enjoyed.
Warning: There be Spoilers in the comments....
This seems interesting will read later or maybe I'll forget
I would have never guessed that this was a letter.
Wonderful story, CG. Very sincere and as always, you handle inner-character thought process perfectly. 
A very nice quick read. Triumph over adversity done right, in my opinion. There were parts that I felt were a bit overly-worded, but those were minor instances. Kudos to you.
I really like this. Especially the end. Well written and moustache for you!
This was so great. And not great as in "awesome", but great as in "epic and divine".
When I realized it was a letter to Rainbow Dash, all my emotions were tripled, and my heart did a happy little dance, because it made things so much more personal. 
Another great story, Cloud. I don't know if you're proud of this one or not, but you definitely should be. I wouldn't be surprised if this one made it to the featured box.
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agreed,wish we had more fics like this,
I was interested in this story because in my own story there's a bit where two characters have to communicate without a common language (in this chapter if you want to go see) and I wanted to see another take on the idea.
Then I read this story... beautiful. It's amazing how you turned 'a character with no lines' into a defining characteristic. I'm adding this to my list of "underrated stories I think more people should read."
The ugly: I noticed two flaws in apostrophe use:
remove that one.
add one there.
Beautiful. The ending just killed my feels.
I didn't find any errors in grammar or spelling. The 3 word runs were a bit strange, but only because you're the first writer I've heard of that does those.
All in all, a very good read. You deserve to be proud.
The first six-hundred or so words couldn't hold my attention, probably due to a few grammar problems that pulled me out of the story, so I skimmed to the end.
Needless to say, I went back and reread it.
The descriptions were decent (I personally enjoyed how they were generally in groups of three). I would suggest adding more focus on the surroundings, but seeing how this was a letter it may not be prudent.
The reveal was great. I definitely never expected the story to be a letter, but it was done to good effect and also makes the POV shifts make far more sense.
This is a stunning story, Thank you so much for sharing it.
That was interesting enough, much emotions bellowed in my mind about inspiration and determination.
But... Why did you choose to not indent the paragraphs?