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TAW


Hi, I'm TAW. I write terrible erotic my little pony fan fiction about cartoon horses having sex with each other, or vaguely defined human audience-inserts, for fun. Because... uh. I have no shame?

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#1 · Jan 8th, 2012 · · ·

Awesome.

Huh, no this one was really nice, the sexy-time not being overly dramatic and the romance-part not being overly-sweet but cute nonetheless.

I must say I'm a sucker for romance, so... good job!

Came here because Twilights my favorite pony, not expecting much but willing to give it a chance. I'm glad I did, nice fic.

*grin-squeek*

absolutely lovely. Twi is my favorite pony, she is the best in my book. and yes, this sounds like something i'd do with her. heartwarming.

I just realized that you are one sneaky writer. You really did not give us a choice really and for that I commend your awesome sneakiness. For one if I took out the headers of both sections and read it straight, well shoot its an entire story! :yay::trollestia::moustache:

Awwwww, Love the ending. :twilightsmile: Sooooooooo cute !

I loved that I could choose the ending, more writers need to do that

"You jump and grab on to the nearest thing and hold it close, only noticing after a few seconds it was hugging back - Twilight teleported behind you when you were distracted." That line made me squee like nobodies business.

...and then I read the rest of it, and now I can't think straight from the squeegasm I just had. Seriously, I've read a lot of stories, but this one is so sweet that it's almost profound. No, not almost, it IS profound. Excellent, excellent job. :scootangel:

I'll go with:

d)Make a marriage proposal

:twilightblush::twilightsmile:

Option D: She rapes you.

BBB

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nah that might be the option for NEXT time though i imagine if there IS a next time...

BBB

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thats all i have to say to that SIR/AND OR MAM I BID YOU A KIND DAY SIR AND OR MAM!!!!!

(i am so unpredictable on how im going to act...)

Second clopfic that hasn't made me laugh like a madman. And yes, that is a good thing.

Congratulations on breaking the 4th wall. :pinkiehappy:
You feel like Pinkie now, don't you? :raritywink:

"...yours isn't red and can't throw people across the room..."
Oh my god! That one totally killed me! :rainbowlaugh:

>She doesn't have to do anything she doesn't want yo, you assure her
>before climbing into bed next to Her

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Freaking awesome! I love how you threw in the extra few jokes and made it that much better. 10/10

Very cute Twilight. Well done. :twilightblush:

i liked the choices

6 years after it was uploaded and I still come back to reread this occasionally.
I still love it.

Still assuring yourself that you're as straight as her horn,

Are you sure this is Romance, and not Comedy? :D


c) Rape her

Leave this window and never return

That should've been a link to another story... ;]

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