Aspiring writer, self-proclaimed hardcore gamer, adept of human psychology. Does not consider excessive pride for a vice.
Zecora needs a special plant for her addiction-breaking potion! It is difficult to find and obtain, but with Scootaloo's help, what could go wrong? Together they come across and venture to explore an abandoned mine.
The mine is pretty abandoned, really.
There is absolutely nothing down there.
Or is it?
Note: the idea for this story came from a great place for those seeking inspiration - you should definitely check it out! Author Support Group Prompt 6
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Ooh, I read Profcharles story using this prompt. Hopefully, this will be just as good.
It has Scootaloo in it and ISN'T some kind of twisted tale of clopping and pedophilia?
Welp, that's a thumbs up from my part.
Cute story. Not much else to say, aside a good idea that you paired such an unusual character pairing.
I liked the riddles. The last one was "rainbow", wasn't it?
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Dear Princess Celestia, the Internet scares me...
What!? There are such things?
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Thanks! It's nothing groundbreaking I suppose, but I really enjoyed writing dialogues and riddles for this one.
And yes, you are correct! Would Scoots come up with anything else...?
A good idea but I'd work on your rhyming namely rewrite the lines where Zecora, known for speaking in rhymes, is not.
so far noting worger with it.
This was amusing and a fun little read.
With that said, there are three spots that I've noticed that have grammatical errors:
It's Punch, not bunch.
Missing the word "mask".
Missing the word "want".
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All fixed, thanks for pointing those out!
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I sent you a PM with my suggestions concerning various portions of the grammar, but otherwise this story was actually pretty enjoyable. I really love the idea of Zecora hanging out with a young filly for a while, and Scootaloo was a good choice. Zecora in general is pretty fun because rhyming~
But I also know that writing her for a prolonged period of time can actually be pretty mentally draining too.
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I received it, thanks! Unfortunately, unlike in that Starlight story where there was only a couple of fixes needed, in this case I have neither time nor desire to change anything, and it will be so for all other stories (at the moment, I just prefer to work on new content than to repair/improve the old).
So just a heads-up in case you'll be reading my other stories with your proofreader eye - do yourself a favor and instead help those who may better appreciate your time and goodwill. I just won't be able to.