The left wall of Sugarcube corner had been nearly completely demolished by the box, and it was a testament to the skill of the earth-ponies who had constructed the building that it was still standing at all. She shook her head and went to examine the words at the top of the thing that had caused all the havoc.
"Police public call box" she murmured softly, eyes almost glowing with curiosity
Twilight Sparkle is planning on having a relaxing day, but that all changes when a blue police box crashes into Sugarcube corner. Now Twilight, Pinkie, and a strange stallion named the Doctor have to try to save Equestria from a threat disguised as their own beloved ruler.
Currently going through a chapter by chapter rewrite, so apologies for any disconnect between edited and unedited chapters
Chapters currently rewritten:
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Well, this certainly is a thing.
And it's in a place.
Well, it's okay. It's not original, but it's a start.
Okay I have to post this before I read this but I honestly thought the title referred to Doctor Whooves being a Changeling Princess.
Fluttrick has a point. This is a pretty standard opening. And it could use some editing. But I'll track this anyway because it still has potential and I'm a sucker for companion!Twilight stories. And Pinkie.
Next chapter is up!
I'll be trying to update at least every other week, and once I wrap up this first adventure (Which shouldn't be too long, only two or three chapters to go), I've got a whole new one in the works and plenty more idea's I'm just dying to get into story form.
I'd love any feedback you have to give, and I hope you have been enjoying the story so far.
Thank you for reading
Allons-y!
i really like these story
but i cant help but think that maybe the doctor should be shocked by pinkie a bit like how she gets stuff out her mane...... hes that kinda person....
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that the worst that could happen doctor
i am now just waiting for twilight to kick him again just for that "sparky" comment
lol i will call Twilight from now on Twilight Snarkle from now on as well!
eeyup doc rage quit.
Good to see SOMEPONY has pointed this out
So Twilight lifted a eleven dimensional, bigger on the inside, type 40 TARDIS?! WHAT
DO YOU KNOW HOW MANY FUCKING ROOMS ARE IN THE TARDIS
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Hmmm... Good catch, guess I kinda dropped the ball on that one
....Although, I guess it could be argued that, like how it is smaller on the outside, the outside of the TARDIS has to weigh considerably less that the sum total of the weight of all it's inside rooms. Otherwise, it would never be able to land on anything that wasn't the ground, because if it landed on the second floor of a building, it would break straight through the floor due to it's massively heavy weight. .
I imagine changing the position of the TARDIS while you were on the inside of it would be much harder, but since Twilight was on the outside, it's possible she is interacting with a smaller outside volume and weight, rather that the gigantic inside volume and weight.
Thank you for pointing that out though
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Well...
Luna went to the moon and the Doctor went to the edge of the universe and back.
Twilight traveled back a week and the Doctor has seen the creation of Earth and the end of time along with stopping time, overriding a fixed point, and rebooting the universe.
"Well Twilight, in that case, I Pinkie Pie swear that I will get your friends back. Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye" Brown hooves copied her movements from earlier, chest cross, foreleg flap, close eye, then hoof.
Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye"
Cross my heart
heart
HEARTS
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Same here, I was a little disappointed when I later read the description.
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The Doctor as a changeling princess would certainly be quite the story
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I love the story so far, and I realize it's already complete, can't wait till I read all of your BRILLIANT! stories!!!
No, comments... THIS IS AN OUTRAGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good work by the way, every story needs a short chapter!
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Omigosh, thank you so much!
I really appreciate it, and I hope you enjoy my other stories
Most of europe eats horses. Including England.
Shining Armor is feeling a great disturbance in the force.
Please no shipping. Shipping is rubbish.
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And don't worry, these stories are all light on the shipping
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well it has been stated that while the inside of the tardis weighs infinely in mass the outside weighs about the same as a regular box because the inside lies in a different dimension than the outside see? the inside and outside masses are separate
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ok maybe i missed something but wasent the initial sense of urgency a fake attempt by twi to get the doc to canterlot? when did that become a real summons?
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umm its simply bigger on the inside just like his tardis its nothing new to him (plus he probably knows about hammerspace)
sending twilight to cadence with no restraint or enclosure
allowing cadence and twi to meet
not just having shining take the barrier down
revealing herself in front of everyone instead of hiding away and use the element of surprise
SENDING HER GUARDS WAY WHEN ALL THE ELEMENTS WERE INFRONT OF HER!!
NOT RESTRAINING SAID ELEMENTS AND PRINCESS!!
ALLOWING SAID UNRESTRAINED ELEMENT TO FREE THE WIFE OF THE ONE THING THAT CAN STOP HER!!
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no it has been canonically stated that the relative weight of the outside of the tardis is separate from the inside due to them being on separate dimentional planes (while the box its self is indestructible when shielded
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The plot-line was actually slightly different from before I edited it, so that's the reason for the inconsistency between the rewritten chapters, one and two, and the others
The four most terrifying words the Doctor has or will ever utter:
"I have a plan."
I NEED WEEPING ANGLES
but still a good story
Celestina how dare he
that's treason oh when I get. MY hooves on him the stupid mousebrain
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Oh star clan, can this book get any better!!! Love this story , like your books!!!
Needs weeping pegisi but still best book ever
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I agree , 50.5% of the chapters in my story's are short any way
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that's sad 
I'm happy now I don't know why
2385361*points out all the time the tardis has been picked up and moved and then points to series 8 episode flat line*
3376218 it never turned into a real summons twilight said that in hopes Luna played along with the lie and because it was a changling it did play along thinking the real Luna did summon twilight
3057961 actually it was cadence
5586758 So it was
A doctor who crossover that does justice to the doctor and gives him his fan-made names.
