• Member Since 11th Sep, 2012
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I am a writer hailing from Denmark, Scandineighvia (*Giggles* Neigh *Giggle*). I hope to both have some fun and make something that you all want to read! Best wishes to you all! Pony On!

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Everything is going well for Cheerilee, or as well as it can for a vampire schoolteacher. All that changes when Princess Luna once again asks her to leave home and face an enemy of Equestria. Will she succeed, or will the Fiends take over Manehatten?

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 125 )

Vampire Cheerilee. Of course.

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Well I saw an Opportunity and Grasped it.
And Totallynotabrony Did not mind :)

You don''t fuck with Countess de la Cheer.
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cheerilee.png
At least, you certainly don't fuck with her more than once.

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O.o I almost feel afraid now... XD

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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True that. Sucks to be the fiends, whoever they prove to be.

I got sent here from totallynotabrony's blog post

Pretty cool, will track

“Not a problem? But if she was bitten, that means there is a rouge vampire on the loose, and he possibly has created more,” said Cheerilee, her eyes a bit more firm than before.
//that means there is a rouge vampire on the loose\\
//rouge vampire\\

ROGUE.
This is one of my pet peeves. It is rogue, not rouge. Rouge is a COLOR, dang it.

Anyway, this seems promising, but your descriptions can be confusing at times- a prime example was the dark cloud blocking the sun. At first I didn't realize you were talking about an actual cloud, because 'dark clouds' are often used metaphorically.

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O.o Sorry! Sorry, Im A foreigner! Forgive me! XD

And the cloud part was kind of a Joke on my own part. Mainly because I often use the Metaphor part, but I Just thought debunking one would be fun :)

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Wait, you're a foreigner? :rainbowhuh: Could've had me fooled.

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Im Danish, English is not my First Language. :twilightblush:

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Do you have a pre reader? Because if not, then your English is very good. Not perfect, but better than a lot of people that I grew up with. :twilightoops:

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Well, Totallynotabrony did read it first, Mainly because It was his Story concept I was starting from :)

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Well, rouge is a reddish-pink color. If you squint hard enough, Cheerilee could be a rouge vampire. Maybe the rogue vampire truly is rouge colored? :trixieshiftright:

Of course, there's always the fearful Rouge Angles of Satin.

1639512 A lot of non-native English speakers do it better than us.

Bring out the Dominator!

Very cool start, I can't wait to see more.

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Forgive my slowness, School are catching up to me :)

1700804 *grins and waves* Don't mention it mate. Life comes first typically :pinkiehappy:

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Sadly yes... -_- Life First, Ponies Later...
:pinkiecrazy:

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Sorry For the wait, But got quite a Lot of things to work on. -_-

1775184 come now sir, I wish for more. And you should get used to using the provided emotes, they are after all so much better :ajbemused:
anywho love your work. I really can't wait to see more, partly so I can form an opinion on your writing style.

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Oh I will try to hurry Up, BUt I just need to dedicate a lot of time to another assignment, Or else Im Buggered! :raritydespair:

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I know how that is. I'm currently procrastinating a programming assignment that is due beginning of next week. I need to develop an entire game, from flow chart to final product. Yet all I do in my programming class is sit there and watch youtube (ironically yesterday was me just watching various musicals about procrastination)

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Welcome to the Procrastination Club, If we both end up failing, We can at least have the same Club Stickers.... :pinkiesad2:

A vampire...” he just said. “The vampires survived... While we were destroyed?

Interesting implication. Can't wait to see how it comes out.

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Fooooooooooreeeeeeshadowiinggg.... :pinkiecrazy:

Loved the ending :pinkiecrazy:
Also i think pen writes clop fiction :rainbowlaugh:

Question, how many years or so is this after Season 1?

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I dont have a specific number, Not many however. Perhaps three, Five or Six years or so. This is before Luck of the Draw, but not much before. Sorry I am not good with numbers :derpytongue2:

Amusing and thrilling.:pinkiesmile:
Awaiting further releases.:fluttershysad:

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I will try and be fast on the next update :derpytongue2:

1639418 but what if the vampire IS rouge?

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:facehoof: i wish i had known that when i made my gamertag on xbox last year, seeing as how the one i had for years was gone which was the one i replaced the first one with :ajsleepy: now my narwhal is painted a girly shade of purple, at least i assume for the moment it is

Not to knock your proofreader, but he is missing a lot of spelling and grammatical errors, for example....

" Cheerilee knew unicorns who, once they had learned magic, they almost completely lost their ability to handle every day life."

That is like saying " the ponies they were talking". Also, the second part of the sentence should state that the unicorns almost completely lost their ability to handle everyday life without magic. Otherwise it kind of sounds like they went insane.:pinkiecrazy:

Hey, don't worry about updates. Your health takes top priority. I rather have a good high quality update that has some depth, that some quickly written fluff just for the sake of an update.

Please keep up the excellent work.

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Thank you :pinkiesad2: It means a lot to me to hear that.
I am always terrified when I feel a chapter comes a bit too late :raritycry:

Awesome ta see you again and I definitely can sympathize with life kidnapping you. Take as long as you need. While we may grumble I doubt many of us would begrudge you needing time.

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Oh thank Luna and Celestia for that :pinkiesad2:
I will try to make this chapter much faster, I promise, however I just always run into my paranoia faze I have to get out of. :pinkiecrazy:

It's so good to read some Vampire Cheerilee again :rainbowwild:

I think you have much bigger problems than geography, Doctor Featherband... Like whether or not you want to continue to have four limbs.

Isn't the Doctor a pegasus? So technically, doesn't he have six limbs? :derpyderp1:

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Oh.... Yea... Its things like this that I notice AFTER I have put the chapter up... :pinkiecrazy:
But I am glad you at least like to read it :ajsmug:

Ah, an update at last.:pinkiehappy:
So it seems that they are both in mortal peril!:pinkiegasp:
Cheerilee must learn this— otherwise, they're doomed!:raritydespair:
Awaiting further releases.:fluttershysad:

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I am soooooo Sorry about the long wait :fluttershysad:
My life just... Decided that time was much more relative than I expected :raritycry:

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