You'd think that going through multiverses would be cool right?
Well it aint. It sucks, to be blunt. Hurts alot too, but that's probably a side effect of appearing up high in the air instead of on the ground... but i digress.
Meet John, and no he aint your average joe. He travels through the multiverse. As he appears over the everfree(cliche, right?), the mane six rush out to "take care of a new and unknown threat to Equestria" as the princess puts it. But what's gonna happen when merely a whiff of his scent is enough to drive a mare crazy with heat? And when he sadly is a xenophobiac - which sucks, with how he travels as he does- and does all in his power to ensure that he dosen't get raped by, well, every. Single. Female. In sight?
Yeah, it's your average HiE description, but this is my first story so get over it. :p
I'll add character tags as I go along.
Dolan pls.
1663652 well that's just lovely :D
pfffff oh my god i can tell this is probably going to be funny
ok, then his blood is acting like some kind of aphrodisiac? you mention that his bad is injure, VERY injure according to you about being to much blood. And according to your description, what they smell was probably his blood.
Never thought the main 6 being part sharks
Hahaha, I'm faving this! Props to a good prologue! Great song choices too.
Dat ending
"Are you fucking kidding me?" Pewdiepie is fucking amazing
lol whut luv it make moarrrr
1664914 Yah, that's about right, nice to see someone understands me, except I was thinking it was his sweat or something like that...
EDIT damnit i just got a shitload of homework dumped on me. D: sorry, the next chapter's gonna take awhile. DD:::<<<<
1664450 Glad you like it! Nice that my first story seems to be a success.
1665609 Bro fist :D
1665805 Oh don't worry, the next chapter should atleast be out before sunday.
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Ah so is sweat, well that is an understanding and it make the story lest creppy, lets hope the girls retain some self-control to heal him before make there move. Hell, if anything it will give them the excuse…The nurse fetiche anyone? (for some reason, I can imagine Rarity and Shy, dressing in the outfit, and trying to make the move, Rarity more strong than Shy)
1668069 aah yes, but I took your idea concerning the blood into consideration and decided that his blood, sweat, and tears when mixed together would become the über turn-on for mares.
even only two of the three would be more potent than just one on its own.
in this story anyways
... how did you know what the ponies were planning xD?
And how long before Luna and Celestia find out of John especial power?
Also, for the look of it, when the ponys will finally caught him, he must probably, be safe, due to they fighting one another and don't even get close to him, for one of two reason or both.
1) They will be or too tired or too beat up, to do something.
2) John, will trick them to fight and he will escape, or capture them to answer his questions
haahahahhahaha
I think rainbows gonads chase him down lol I can def see it
Eh, not the WORST way to go...
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wow just read the description and started laughing. dis gonna be good
well fuck. this is going to be a very weird but hilarious story. i have one more thing to say
MORE MORE MORE MORE MMOOOOOORRRRRRRREE
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i'm with you there buddy
Moar? MOAR!
Sorry about the wait everyone
,but I've got a Shitload of homework right now
, and I'm working on another story... 
don't worry, I'm definitely not finished with this one yet. :p
1672617 I condemn thee to...
DEATH BY SNU-SNU
They lyrics are
'I feel it in my bones, enough to make my systems BLOW'
and
'I rasie my FLAG, and don my clothes'
Just thought i'd let ya know.
hiatus?
2546481 yeaahh.... lol i forgot to change that :p
Sorry to anyone who's waiting for the next chapter (even though it's like, 2 people at the most and I'm being optimistic here, I'm pretty sure most have completely forgotten it by now), but.... writers block. I just, can't come up with ANYTHANG, then again I am actually working on something else at the moment... and have been for quite a while actually :/ Hm, should probably give what I have to someone who can like help me 'n stuff.... but too lazy.... oh choices.