Two Hundred years.
That is how long ago the war between the Clockworks and Equestria was. Three years of fighting left the Clockworks in disarray, and in
their confusion, the Equestrian army marched onto their Capital, intent on capturing their Princess and ending the war for good.
But the Princess of Time was no where to be found.
Bronze Fog and her bodyguard, Brutus the Diamond Dog, have
been traveling Equestria for the past three years. The two hundredth anniversary of the victory over the Clockwork army was nearing; and Bronze and Brutus know what to do on that day...
Chapters (1)
Wow.
Didn't even have to open the actual fic to know how bad this is, what with the bios of the two ultra sues in the description.
Automatic thumbs down, this story sucks.
"i'll need it"
"Celestia Beleives"
"a Special somepony"
"Ba55 B3z3rk3r"
"enchanted so it creates wubs"
"OFF DA CHARTS"
"most powerful Chrono-magic user"
"left pupil is the shape of a gear"
Suckage level: 9/10
Troll level: 7/10
1698977 Thanks for the tips
1698959 sorry it sucks
1698388 he's strong but you see him less and less in future and she...well she can't take a hit meaning one punch = out like a light
1698977 refer to 1700038 for sue problem
i like this so far keep it up!
1702215 Thanks uncle koso
yeah thanks
BRONZE YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BE UNCONSIOUS
calm down please
shut up Brutus and BOTH OF YOU BACK IN THE STORY
*silence*
good
1702245
How about Leaf?
You too Disc.
1704146 AGREED...though he is cute
I agree. No homo.
I like the plot, but you may want to lower Brutus' strength level. He's a little over powered at the moment. Can't really change Bronze, or else the story goes down.
How about a story more like this?
Aftermath of Time
1704246 yea he'll kinda dissappear for unimportant parts of story and OH GOD THAT IS AWESOME...you are god
1704262
Did you read the spin off summary of a random story that I will never post and just posted it there so you would have a good idea of what to do?
1704266 yes but she was an adult at the time of the war and was reverted to a filly by Brutus in order to protect her thus she lost all memory of the war.
1704294
that would have been helpful to know
I don't know alot of people are saying thumbs down but I'm saying "I like where this is leading" thumbs up
1705559 yay and the action will die down but then grow insanely powerful near the end
1705600 yes now I is have something to do while muh arm heals...
1705613 *giggle* Eeyup and uh...my writing skills aren't very good but I have anuther story coming out later this month that'll have more funny and I have a question...Should I add in the Explosive expert Clockwork or the Stealth Clockwork, first?
1705640 don't know with stealth yah could have a guy that assasinates them quietly like a ninja but with explosives yah could have a guy that walks around like Arnold and just blows shit up and makes cheesy one liners
very tough descion indeed
1709619 both are quiet, both have next to no emotion, Explosive likes to prank ponies, and Stealth loves to scare ponies.
1709654 well in that case I'd say explosives but the choice is really up to you
1715690 I know and depending on the vote (will put in blog later on) I will decide
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What?!?!?
1745590 creepy stare. it means im watching you
1745595
Of.... Course it does.
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1745706>>1745694 WHAT THE EVER-LIVING BUCK ARE YOU GUYS TALKING ABOUT
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I dunno.
Things got out of hand really quick...
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1745727>>1745717
Do you see this?!?!?
What is wrong with you?
Not you, bronze, the other guy.
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WE ARE NOT F*CKING STARTING THIS AGAIN!
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yes we are.
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1745647 i found a better image for this comment
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1802292
What the F*$k is wrong with us?
1817895 i dunt knaow
MOTHER FUCKING MORE GOD DAMN YOU BRUTUS MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
