Twilight Sparkle goes to the Apple Family farm to retrieve Smarty Pants from Big Macintosh, and realizes that she may have done some damage to him. Concerned for his well-being, Twilight Sparkle works to ween him off his new condition, and consults with an expert on the subject. Over the following weeks, she realizes how troublesome taking care of anypony can be a hassle.
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great story, but in the last paragraph you, instead of spelling "that", spelled "hat".
Err... this story seems familiar for some reason.
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It was by FF.net and done by the same author because they have the link listed under their profile here.
This was really good. Like and Follow. I don't get how this could possibly get featured with nine likes over three hours, but whatever.
D'aaaaw, that picture is so cute
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Ahh, good then. I was worried I was experiencing an odd case of deja vu again. That happens to me too often.
Great story, I loved it!
That is actually a wonderfully thought out idea. No one really considers how magic can affect non-unicorns in a bad way so this is a good step in a new direction. Well done
This is a great idea, and I'm looking forward to reading more of it.
You guys are so freaking wonderful, I love all of you.
I'm editing Chapter 3 now. If you bronies find grammar or spelling mistakes, let me know! I want to get this featured on EQD!
I just gotta ask, what was ip towards the end? Half the story repeated
1638869 Thanks for catching that! I knew there was something wrong!
1638884 No prob, I love the story
Again, this is an excellent idea, and you're pulling it off quite well. Keep up the good work!
1638909 You are all going to love the next chapter.
1638955 Man you just keep on writing the chapters. Good, I always hate waiting for the next chapter of a great story
You were right, I loved this chapter! Nice touch with Dinky in the CMC
Yay
Too bad it's on haitus, though. Hope you continue it soon.
Glad to see this is posted on this site.
In the meantime, have a thumbs up and a fave!
1639131 Hiatus? Son of a gun, I was really looking forward to reading more of this.
1639159 Wait on hiatus? Aw man
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Yeah, I was going to end up having Ditzy Do talking to Oblong about her problems with Dinky's half-sister but I decided that was really drawl and not nearly relevant to the story.
To be honest, I don't know where to go from here with it. I haven't decided if this is a Shipping fic or not; I honestly do not know how this is going to end.
I loved it!!!! i started reading this morning and just could not stop!
i give it 10/10
Only 35 likes and featured?
Eh, might as well give it a read.
Sounds interesting but that "On Hiatus" is a bit off-putting. I don't like unfinished stories...
Based on reading more about this magic addiction. is this suppose to work like radiation eposure but opposite?
i have an idea...
can you make APPLEBLOOM addicted too? she was the first earth pony the spell effected and since she spends all her time with her freinds lately (a unicorn and a pegasus, both create their own magic) she should show signs..even if it's late.
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That's an idea. I'll think on it.
Please continue!
1639591 yay!! i hope it makes it in the next chapter. do you know when you'll update next?
Wait, Spike gloated? I think you used the wrong word there... Gloated basically means rubbing it someone's face, liken to bragging.
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Whenever I make a decision
Hiatus... The kryptonite of FIMFiction.net....
Such a good story. I love the pacing and the way it's all set up. Very nice, smooth delivery, and just the right amount of chapter for the narrative. Not too long to start sounding long-winded, but not so short that you don't really get anything out of it. Very nice indeed!
Also, The writing in of the accents- Love it. Kinda hard to read the first time, if you're just glancing it over or don't know what the accents sound like, but it's pretty easy to sound out or read outright if you do or have been around those accents before.
You get a Like and a Fav. I can't wait to see more :3
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It's on Hiatus because I don't know how I'm going to end it.
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The most fun part about this Fic is reading it out loud. You have to in order to really follow what they're saying; that's a point I deliberately make.
You sir, have managed to make Big Macintosh adorable.
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I know! I spend a bunch of times reading over Pinkie and her Great Uncles lines before the party, just because it was so much fun to say!
Interesting.
Awww, no romance tag? ; ;
I... guess I'll read it anyway... Though with a premise like this, I'm SLIGHTLY disappoint for no romance. ; ;
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A way that some writers to get out writers block is they they ask for suggestions in the comments and use them to get ideas.
I have been a part of stuff like that before and it is fun for both parties most often than not. And the other peoples input can create interesting and good chapters.
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It might be. I haven't decided.
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Isn't that what people in the comments are for?
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Yeah but people feel more comfortable if you say it out right and are more likely to post suggestions.
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That's what I'm doing now, isn't it? :P
A good read, if I say so myself. I like the premise of having them hooked on magic. And why do scientists have to have that accent anyway? Izn't zat steereotyping ze scientists? Eet iz wrong to say zat all scientists sound like zis. Aaand I suck at writing accents.
Anyway, I have no intention of rushing you... As you said through Big Mac, "Slow and steady gets the field plowed."
But still... It would be nice if you continued...
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Ah, a fellow scienteest! I am very pleased to haff you arount.
I am currently tryink to think of how to end this piece. I am not sure where I am goink viff zhees.
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I'd offer a suggestion, but I am a bad writer... But I am a good reader! Sometimes..
Though I have one suggestion that might help. And I do hope it does.
Don't fret about the ending just yet. Ease into it gently... No need to make this too short. Some of us here love to read a good story. Like a certain lavender unicorn.
Oh wait, she reads textbooks. Hmmm... No difference there.
I may not be the best WRITER, but I can come up with a pretty decent addition to any storyline pretty easily. Namely;
Shipping? Meh, make some funny/awkward moments that have to do with "Shipping", and I'm sure people will enjoy it.
Mayor Mare? Maybe her hair wasn't ALWAYS pink.....at least, not before "Lesson Zero".....If you catch my drift.
As someone else mentioned, was AppleBloom ever affected by the doll? Maybe you could come up with something to explain why she didn't develop the addiction like her brother. Maybe the fact she's around a Unicorn(Heavy Magic User) and a Pegasus(Medium Level Magic User) helps.
Lol, bon-bon. Get out of the closet
This is a fantastic story!
I hope the hiatus doesn't last long I'm looking forward to the finished story!
Ok, that was one of the best parts I've ever read in a story before, the diagnosis of Pinkie Pie was brilliant, I was on the floor almost crying! I also love how you did the doctor he really is a great character.
I for one hate OCs and I thought there was a missed opportunity for using Dr. Whooves (Give the stallion his TARDIS, Dammit!), but I really do like this doctor. Well done you gave OCs a chance!
I hope you continue the story soon, until then good luck!
Random fact of the day: Pinkie Pie to this day is the only pony known to have successfully teleported without the use of magic. The Academy of Science is still investigating this strange phenomenon. Local student Twilight Sparkle has given up her investigation, in response the Academy is sending another student known as ...... The GPT
.
God save the Sparkle!