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Rainbow Dash unleashes a new stunt she created for the latest Wonderbolts tryout session. Feeling confused about her chances at becoming a professional stunt flyer she returns to Ponyville and await the impending news. But things aren't what she exactly remembers.

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Yet another story idea that I've been sitting on for a while. I did my best to proofread but with 0 hours of sleep. PM me if you see any glaring spelling grammar errors and as always, let me know what you think.

Oh snap...this has potential. Looking forward to it!

More! Lovin' it! :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

Also, do you think I could get an image of twilight as she is here? I'm having a hard time imagining her.

This is getting strange every time I have an idea pop into my head I look on the the new stories list and see someone's just done it :rainbowderp:

Uh great story now I'm going to go rock in this corner muttering thing about how people are watching me and are reading my mind :pinkiecrazy:

LET'S DO THE TIME WARP AGAAAAAAAAAAAIIIN!!!:pinkiehappy:

WHAT IN THE NAME OF-?!


That was cool.

Yes, I like where this is going.

Ooh, this is interesting! :pinkiegasp:
Is everyone turning into G1? :rainbowhuh:
...Or G64... I forget these generations now :rainbowlaugh:

"We have Doughnuts, cake, pie, bear claws, cannoli, baklava...

I don't know why, but I instantly thought of Weird Al :rainbowlaugh:

I felt phase one and two of Rainbow's flying routine lacked description. Even if just a short description telling the reader what she did, because I found myself reading phase 3 before I even realized! :rainbowlaugh:

Otherwise I thought this was great :pinkiehappy: The grammar's good enough that nothing punched me in the jaw, so that was refreshing. To be honest I'm a little unsure why this got a dislike already.

I eagerly await more. :moustache:

Im liking this story, keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

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And here's Rainbow Dash/Firefly and Pinkie Pie/Surprise for good measure:
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I know that feel more than you'll realize. The same thing happened to me several times and usually beaten by months when I've made sufficient progress in my own story.

1639179 no I'm saying it happens almost instantly as I begin writing. I look I the new stories list and the exact same idea is there already. Of course I don't mind coz I'm lazy and usually can't be bothered writing my idea in the first place I sometimes look forward to writing them and for it to be original. E.G. My story lost memories first chapter up straight away already a story with the Same idea. Drunken Rainbow same thing :twilightangry2: oh well still love this story and waiting for more

Ooh ooh what happened to the real fire fly if Rainbow Dash is in her body? Does she like switch places with Rainbow or something

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ThankyouThankyouThankyou!!!

And also, how often will you be updating this?

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Depends on how much time I have and what I feel like working on. I have one other story I'm actively working on and another that's in the process of being rewritten and an epic that I'm going to put out pending any material season 3 is going to give me.
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You'll have to wait and find out.

1639279 awwwww but I can picture Fire fly freaking out

I may be over thinking this, but when Rainbow Dash flies high into the mesosphere, did the lack of oxygen give her some kind of brain damage?

really interesting so far. Epic with a side of Awesome sauce. (I'm exaggerating but I wanted to say that)
Another favorite to add to my list of stories that ARENT UPDATING!!
Jeez it's like when I fav something the author goes "I think I'll quit for a while."
With my luck the next chapter won't be out for a while.

This chapter was much shorter than I really intended it to be. But that was mainly because I didn't want to sit there and regurgitate the whole Mare in the Moon pilot. As always, a bit of proof reading would be appreciated since I'm firing these off under some severe sleep deprivation.

Curious. I'll follow this a little more before judging.

I shall wait for the next chapter

ohhh dear... RD, you timeshifted and swapped bodies and universes with your ancient ancestor/G-somethingorother rendition.

Very intriguing... I look forward to where this is going.

Um... sorry, but can I have pictures of Rarity as she is here, and fluttershy and spike?

Heh. Watch Megan come in with Princess Celestia's voice. :trollestia:

Moremoremore...... NOW.

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