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MAGO5


Machine-God be praised. Also, call me "Mago-Five" and I'll forcefully shove a chainblade mechadendrite up your rectum. I mean it. Don't do it.

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When Gilda is thrust into a dark, violent world, she must ally with unlikely characters, learn the importance of teamwork and compassion, and fight the unspeakable horrors of the darkspawn if she ever hopes to survive, for in this world life is not given freely, but is wrested from the wicked.
MLP/Dragon Age: Origins crossover. Cover image courtesy of my dear friend PartyCannon on DeviantArt.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 25 )
#1 · Jan 8th, 2012 · · ·

cool story bro
*goes back to 'Name's Ellis'
:ajsmug:

I'll keep an eye on this
*also goes back to Names Ellis* :eeyup:

#3 · Jan 8th, 2012 · · ·

I like this story, hope to read it more.

WOAH WOAH WOAH GILDA IN DRAGON AGE?!?!? FUCK YEAH!

also @20%derpier HOW DARE YOU USE SUCH LANGUAGE YOU FOAL

It disheartens me that people will vastly prefer a comedy over a serious fanfiction...
Ah well. I guess it's a fact of life. Too bad this is gonna take away some writing time from Name's Ellis, because I'm alternating between this and that.
Inconsistently, of course.

#6 · Jan 8th, 2012 · · ·

Loved the story, man. looking forward to seeing more in the future.

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

#8 · Jan 12th, 2012 · · ·

I'm like it so for, please continue.

#9 · Jan 12th, 2012 · · ·

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Please don't let that dishearten you, there are probably quite a few people who are enjoying this story. Like me!!!!:pinkiehappy:

I'll still read it, I love stories like this! :derpytongue2:

I agree that it is a cool story.
*Goes to find out what Name's Ellis is*:duck:

as a dragon age fanatic, i have to say,
Gilda in thedas almost works out TO well
i eagerly await to see how you do this. you have one new reader

You fans are annoying. Just reading the comments makes me want to facepalm myself a bloody nose. He puts out a story and all you do is bug him about the other story. People really just don't seem to care about the author, it's just the story. I have the same problem with Wrong Hospital. I'm like "Hey guys, go check out Undead Equestria. That's the fic i have worked hardest on." Instead, 40% of the comments on my story are MOAR :pinkiesmileX10. And my other fic is ignored. I'm still amazingly glad I made featured. But bleh, readers are like pirhanahs!

407885
There are certain things an internet writer must come to accept, mate.

About 70% percent of it all is dumbassery.

Not saying that 70% of all the internet users are dumbasses, but their input usually doesn't make a fart of a difference. I take it all in stride most of the time; sometimes I come across a little gem of constructive feedback. They help the most, gotta tell ya, but it's usually, as you said, :flutterrage:MOAR!!!:flutterrage:

Or something to that effect.

My point is, you can't blame the masses for lack of overall intelligence. If they don't prefer this fic, then I'll just keep working on my other one. When that's done, I could probably corral a good deal of them this way, but with that whole "featured box popularity", it's a hit-and-miss; hard to get consistently, unless you're ROB or Cog and have hundreds of followers. Keep writing your stories regardless of the audience size. A small group of readers is better than no readers at all.

408393 I do not plan to stop anytime soon. Thank you for words

Please for the love of the maker please continue this im a mega dragon age fan and I really what to read this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

515762
It shall be continued.
Eventually...

519726 Oh thank you kind sir thank you.:pinkiehappy:

By the creators this fic is amazing! It seems the griffons will indeed rise again. Dareth shiral and may this fic gain many faves. :twilightsmile:

I'm similarly disappointed that your first few commenters more or less brushed this off in favor of Name's Ellis. While it's certainly a favorite of mine (first fic I read on this site in fact) this chapter had me hooked and I'm kinda :fluttercry: that it's on hiatus. The only reason I'd also ask you to get back to Name's Ellis is so you can give this fic your full, undivided attention (though I notice you started another fic in the interim. Hope that works out for you too).

So it looks like you're going with the male human noble eh? Same as me actually. I'm not picky but can we expect a Warden/Morrigan romance on the side (to see if there are any other similarities)? Hopefully Aeus can get his act together soon and get his revenge on Howe (though I'm sure we both know how that goes).

And I'm glad to see Gilda is still, well, Gilda. Dominic really needed to give her that reality check. Maker knows this is just one great big setup for some good old-fashioned character development. Once Gilda is in Ferelden I can only imagine the reactions. One griffin still lives, and it can talk, and she's a total bitch. :trollestia:

For a character with only one ep under her belt, I can imagine a lot of chemistry between Gilda and the rest of the cast. She and Morrigan will either get along famously or be at each other's throats (Alistair must lament the prospect of hearing "utter shrew" in surround sound once the latter joins the party). She'll probably have to sleep with one eye open once Shale joins the party, being half bird and all (what pet name will Shale come up with for her, I wonder?) and of course, you must have at least one scene where she and Dog get confrontational (everyone else does). To say nothing about how she'll handle the sloth demon nightmare or the Guardian's probing in The Gauntlet.

I'm keeping my eyes on this, even if it is a month or so old. :pinkiehappy:

P.S. I'm not sure if there's a private messaging system, but if you want to draw more viewers to this fic, I have a suggestion for how you can tie it into Name's Ellis's ending (though it may or may not work depending on what plans you have already).

Nice story, got potential... I sill have to figure out how you are going to get Gilda to Ferelden, not to mention making her a Grey Warden, though.

I'll keep an eye out, in case there will be more of it at one point.

Y1

Is this story dead? The concept interests me, and the first chapter reads fine, but it hasn't updated since May of 2012. I'd like to fave it, but I'm not going to if it's never going to update again.

WHEN THE FUCK IS THIS THING GOING TO UPDATE

Hoping to see more of this! :ajsmug:

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