Why us?

by Ice

Chapter 1:Pain is temporary love is eternal

"WHAT?!" a guard was knocked down by the sheer force of the shout.

"O..our r..reports s..show he escaped little under twenty)four hours ago" said the same guard, barely regaining his confidence.

"....How did he escape?"

"H..he used the window in his cell and sneaked through the gardens, as far as we can tell."

"I'm sorry but correct me if I'm wrong. ONLY the old dungeon has windows, correct?"

"Y..yes." the guards white coat seemed to grow paler somehow as he realized what she had said.

"So a prisoner I personally request to be jailed is put in the worst jail cell we have to sum up captain."

"Yes your majesty." the guard began praying that somepony would enter the throne room

"So first you question my orders then you let the prisoner go basically...... what's to stop me trying you for treason?"

"I would never do such a thing you majesty." he said anger evident in his voice

"Is that all you have to say in your defence?

"Y..yes."

"Then I find you guilty and sentence you to death,GUARDS!" a squad of four guards burst into the room

"Take the captian to the guillotine and prepare for a puplic excecution."

"I'm sorry your highness did you say A EXCECUTION!?" shouted one of the guards

"Yes,yes I beleive I did."

"I refuse to do this your majesty." said the same guard the others nodding in agremment

"Well then I'll dispose of you all myself then" after a short pause a humongous light erupted from Celestia causing the throne room to burn with the heat of a star going supernova.The screams of the guards could be heard throughout the night in Canterlot and beyond causing all including Brice to turn to source of the noise.

"No...please tell she hasn't" he thought as the screams could be easily identified as male

"T..THAT BITCH!" he screamed into the night

"N..no I can't let this stop me" he thought as he continued his walk towards Ponyville.
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"WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU JUST LET HIM GO TO CONFRONT CELESTIA!" Rainbow Dash was livid after hearing what Zephyr and Blue Breeze had told her

"Well we couldn't exactly stopped him he was teleported." said Blue holding his hooves in front of his face worried she would strike him

"UGH YOU GUYS ARE IDIOTS YOU COULD HAVE AT LEAST HAVE TOLD US"

"Well we never see him talk to anypony else so we took his privacy into account" said Zephyr hopping this would calm her down

"PRIVACY WHO CARES ABOUT PRICACY IF HE'S DEAD?"

"RAINBOW DASH!" shouted a voice from the doorway their body clocked by the darkness of the night

"Oh...hi...I..was...um...there." said Rainbow Dash frightend by the stranger

"Ah know what you were doing sugercube but balling at them won't help." said Applejack stepping into the house

"Applejack?" asked a puzzled Blue Breeze

"Yheah it's me and ah need to ask you something." she said approching them
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"Ugh at least Ponyville is nearby" thought Brice as he had almost completed his long walk back from Canterlot

"Although I'm suprised nothing like a manitcore attack happened" he muttered himself as he exited the Everfree forest but suddenly although it was planned a portal appeard above him and a black figure fell from it.

"AGH WHAT THE HELL!" he shouted as he tried to heave the figure off of his chest

"Ugh my head where am I?" said the creature it's voice calm and cooling

"Your on me buddy." said Brice

"What oh um sorry....WHAT THE HELL!?" it shouted in shock. Brice got a good look at the figure it was a feline type peagsus with a black coat and its wing had puple under them while it's eyes were different colors one being blue and the other one being silver.

"Um...hi." said Brice slowly waving a hand

"....Why are you here?" it said slowly

"Okay male." thought Brice "Well I just came from Canterlot and I'm about to head into Ponyville." said Brice

"OH THANK GOD I'm in Equestria" he said seeming relieved

"Okay......so you got a name?" said Brice

"Of course I've got a name are you stupid?" smirking slightly

"Heh and I thought Blue was a smartass." he thought "...If you want to live you'll start talking and stop mocking." he said before chuckling slightly "Zecora must be starting to rub off on me." he thought

"Ugh fine since I'm feeling nice,I'm Mobius and you are?"

"Brice."

"Kinda bland..mabye I'll you rice"

"shaddup." he had been called that in school he knew his friends were kdding when they said it where kidding but it got on his nerves.

"So anything been going on?"

"Well if you are from around here I suppose the only thing that has happened is Twilight dying."

"WHAT!" Mobius shouted

"IT'S TWILIGHT SHE CAN'T DIE!" Brice jumped back slightly Mobius was probably an old friend of Twilight's so he'd have to tread carefully.

"Dude calm down and I'll explain."

"Fine start from the beginning" he said after a couple of deep breaths.

"......then she cast a spell on me and.."

"I KNEW YOU WERE TO BLAME!" shouted Mobius lunging for Brice

"BUCK" he shouted as he barely got out of the way in time "I knew I should have left that out." he thought

"WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU?" shouted Brice

"YOUR THE REASON SHE'S DEAD!" shouted Mobius as he charged at Brice again

"PISS OFF!" shouted Brice landing a blow into his gut stopping Mobius in his tracks

"Heh nice try" he said triping up Brice with his tail and pouncing on top of him

"Ready to die?" he said claws coming out of one his claws when suddenly he fell on top of Brice only able to mutter "Fucking Applejack."

"Hold on a second he can curse properly?" thought Brice as he rolled to get out from under Mobius

"WHAT WHERE YOU DOING?" shouted AJ,RD and Rarity at him

He facepalmed "It's gonna be a long,long night" he thought as the verbal assualt continued.
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Meanwhile back at the castle

"CHARGE" shouted another battlion of guards as they were torn apart by Celestia

"NO,NOPONY IS GOING TO STOP THE ME I'M THE QUEEN I GET WHAT I WANT,YES!" she thought madly to herself

"SISTER" Celestia's gaze turned from the door to her younger sister standing beside her

"So little sister have you come to join me?"

"Join you in what?"

"Oh you'll see." she said with an evil grin.Screams could be heard until daytime in which the sun never rose.
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Author's note:Okay so sorry about last post I edited this A LOT it was barely eight hundred words for my first draft so I redid for you guys.Also sorry Mobius I'm impatient with waiting.

Comments

[Primordial Deomontus]

FIRST and this is very good

[Ice]

122059 Nice to see your still reading.

[Baboosh]

....power of the sun...as a pin point weapon...they are sooo screwed

[Ice]

122256 My god sir you doubt my pow......shit your right.

[Baboosh]

122265

(puts on sunglasses)

get outa the kitchen, or yer ganna get burned

[Ice]

122277 (takes them then puts them on) dude I'm Ice cold
YYYYYYYYYHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH

[Dunbarrio]

WUT!!!???
amazing but still wut

[Swokk]

TROLLESTIA RULES, EQUESTRIA FAILS

[Zephyr]

If you live too long, you go mad eventually...

And it's just worse if you can't die.

[Ice]

123968 I'm stealing that.

[Zephyr]

123974

[Ice]

123981 You'll get credit

[Purple Blaze]

Tyrant Celestia?

Bitch, please... Lunar Republic!

[Ice]

124067 Who said anything about a tyrant?

[Mobius of the Moon]

And the inclusion of Mobius was a little sudden. Why do I try to kill you? Well, wait, I remember now. um, if anything's confusing about how I enter, well let's just say you'd have to read my story to understand a lot of it.

[Mobius of the Moon]

123968
Well, Mobius has lived over five thousand years, so hah! I haven't gone insane... no seriously, read my story to find out.

[StrykertheZombie]

*processing*
*ding*
"Tha fuck just happened?!?"