What happens when Octavia, Vinyl Scratch, Lyra and Bonbon all decide to tackle on the game of Everfree? They have to face the famous Slenderpony, that's what. Chaos and hilariousness ensues.
Vinyl Scratch, or DJ PON-3 as she's known on stage, likes to sit back and enjoy her music through her Epod. Time always seems to flow during her little relaxation moments.
Alright, five Internet points to the first person who can correctly name the first song and its artist. (Regidar, I swear to fing God I will delete your comment if you give it away. You have an unfair advantage, bro, so you automatically get five Internet points anyway).
Very cute story. I liked the flow of it. My only (constructive) criticism would be an occasional mismatch of past and present tense. "Now was a time for relaxing." past tense. "I kick back in the old recliner ..." present tense, "I closed my eyes behind my shades and allowed my music to overcome me." past. I do this a lot when I try to write present tense because I'm not used to it.
2418070 Long story; all of my stories have 18 down-votes because of some parasprite who I got into a huge argument with. I told Poultron but he didn't do anything about them.
Alright, five Internet points to the first person who can correctly name the first song and its artist. (Regidar, I swear to fing God I will delete your comment if you give it away. You have an unfair advantage, bro, so you automatically get five Internet points anyway).
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I would rather subtract a hundred million internet points to anyone who doesn't know what that's from.
Very cute story. I liked the flow of it. My only (constructive) criticism would be an occasional mismatch of past and present tense. "Now was a time for relaxing." past tense. "I kick back in the old recliner ..." present tense, "I closed my eyes behind my shades and allowed my music to overcome me." past. I do this a lot when I try to write present tense because I'm not used to it.
1650848 Ah, thanks! I'll go fix that now! And yes, minus 100 IP to anyone who doesn't know it.
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1651489 Here we are now, entertain us.
1651547 My reputation precedes me.
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1651553 Oh, Regidar. This site loves you and your Nirvana fanboyism
1651742 I've inspired many.
1651750 True. Honestly, you were 90% of the reason I wanted to put Nirvana in. The other 10 was my own fanism.
1651768 Just for me? I'm flattered.
ALSO
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1651784 It's what you get for being one of the largest commenters.
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I do the exact same thing with Piano man that Viynl does....
I dunno what's the story with all the downvotes I think this is a perfect little piece. *shrugs* no accounting for taste.
2418070 Long story; all of my stories have 18 down-votes because of some parasprite who I got into a huge argument with. I told Poultron but he didn't do anything about them.