Derpy's, the loving and caring Mother of Dinky (and possibly some others), life has finally reached a dead end. After being fired from her job, and no where else to turn, the last straw as been turned for Derpy: She asks Twilight Sparkle in the hopes that she can fix her eyes! And by the mere look of things, it was a complete success! But with her new eyes fixed, Derpy's view (and intelligence) on life suddenly takes a drastic change, some for better, and for others, much much worse....
(A short spin-off story of my current season 3 fic. Was origionally gonna be a single chp/epi but had too much fun writing this, so turning it into another short story. Read and review about what ya like! And don't bother pointing out flaws- writing this on Yahoo, no real sense of auto-correct on it).
Reading just for the concept
Great story, great concept.
I love it, please continue.
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I look foward to reading more
I like the story but the formatting is killing me. Why is it so spaced out?
Still genius Derpy activate!
more!!
There needs to be more!!!
I demand more!!!!
I must congratulate you this is the first "completed" that has left me in a sense of figurative hunger for more. It is midnight right now and I'm going to bed but if there was was more of the story I would not be apposed to staying up tell 4 in the morning reading. Of the many stories I have read in the category of 12,000-20,000 word stories you have reached #1.
For this you shall receive a like. a fave, a follow, and all the internets I can legally give!