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Chaos of Canterlot


I am a huge MLP fan, specifically concentrated towards Discord

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It's been 3 long years since Chaos had been abandoned by his mother. He's been wandering all over Equestria, hoping to live somewhere. Unfortunately, no one wants him around. He ends up in Ponyville, hoping that he will be able to stay there and maybe learn more about his origins. But in his curiousity, he kicks up some dust with his own family and not in a good way. Dark tag for some violence in later chapters.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 27 )

So a god of chaos walks into a town...

Why thank you my good friend *tips hat*

1685090 I feel obliged to say this, the guy can't see your comment unless you "reply" to it... Anyways, good story!

1685186 See on the comments, the little chat bubble thing? Click it and numbers will appear in the comment typing section. Just submit your comment and you've replied to them.

I would help you, but I am proofreading for about 10 other stories. I got my hands full over here.

1714833 Thanks anyway bud. Know anyone that could help me?

A few years ago, Discord’s statue was destroyed during a storm. It fell from its pedestal and shattered.

LIES AND SLANDER, ALL OF IT!

Celestial you just made my worst pony list I'm putting u right above trixie

Celestia is a real bitch in this story and I think calling him Chaos pretty much lets the cat out of the bag on her lieing to Twilight about Chaos being Discord.

1741250 Exactly. It's gonna get better in a little while though

1741195 I would agree but i was trying to do the other side of the coin with Celly

1741294 I can see that and your doing a really good job at it

1741325 Thanks. This is my first story so i hope I'm doing well enough

>>c741364 oh yeah your doing a great job one of my top ten favourite fics

Eh-HEM

Celestia's being a bitch.

That is all.

Twas kinda confusing, but I got it at the end.

1873475 good confusing or bad confusing? Do I need to edit it and reform it?

1875637 It was a little bit confusing on what was going on until Luna woke up and I realized it was a dream, so good confusion.

pretty nice, didn't read it at first because I didn't like the cover art, and thought it was probably not good TBH (yes yes, judgemental and silly and blah), but i gotta say, you really surprised me with this story! :twilightblush::twilightsheepish:

1929421 Thanks. Glad you like it. I'm gonna change the cover art soon, btw

Okay, finally caught up on my reading. First of all, I kinda feel that Celestia is kinda bi-polar in the last chapter and now. She was acting with pure hatred, and with no motivation to the contrary, she just started caring for Chaos. How something normally would have happened, would be something like Celestia trying to save him, then trying to find a way to cover it up, and eventually (probably in the same chapter) she would start to grieve for him, but probably through Luna's POV.

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2040399 I know I realize that she does seem very bi-polar-ish but i didnt know how else to do this cause I needed it for the story line. But thanks for the feedback

Please! Write more it's amazing! :fluttercry::twilightsmile:

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