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Her eyes narrowed. “Do it again.”

For some reason, my mind immediately went here.

Cadance is best Carol Channing. Try reading her dialogue in that sexy voice.
(Yes, I'm aware the woman in the video is not actually Carol Channing, but one of the myriad of Carol Channing impersonators.)

"...lusty groans and elongated moans..."

Sounds like something I'd write. :twilightsmile:

I'll admit that I'm not into the whole milking fetish, but damn it if you didn't make the whole thing seem sexy. That's a real credit to you as a writer.

That being said, this whole chapter was well written and the clop scenes were quite hot. Another outstanding job!

This was different. I like it!:twilightsmile:

Very sweet. I approve. Milky titties are best titties.

and now i have a new Fetish for pony tits/milk

Hmmmm, needs more socks I think :trixieshiftright:
Not really my thing, but this was still pretty good

There's no part of this story I don't like.

Commence read.

1626942 Agreed.

This seems to give a new appreciation for crotch-boobs, as well.

next chapter with cute foal birth!

Well, this is new.
I like it!

First clopfic i fully read.
In fact, i want more involving these two.

1626942 Thanks a ton! I'm glad that even though you're not into that sort of thing, you were still able to enjoy it. Also, Carol Channing...:rainbowlaugh:

1626951 I'm glad you did. Thanks for the read!

1627041 Damn straight, sir. Damn straight.

1627088 Then my plan has worked perfectly. :pinkiecrazy:

1627089 Glad you liked it!

1627269 Thanks!

1627296 Much appreciated!

1627315 Anatomically correct equines can be beautiful too. Thanks for the read!

1627719 Heh, this one's just a one-shot, but I'm glad you liked it.

1628600 I've been trying to branch out a little here and there, try my hand at different ideas. Sometimes (as in this case), they seem to work pretty well. Thanks for your continued comments and feedback!

1628904 I'm honored to be the author of your first clopfic. I sincerely hope you enjoyed it. In a bit of shameless self-promotion, allow me to provide you with a link to another, longer story I've written about Shining Armor and Princess Cadance: The Second Time Around. If you have the time, you ought to check that one out.


This was really good. I love stories involving pregnant ponies for some reason. :twilightsmile:

1630254 Thanks for the comment and fave! I'd never tried a story with a pregnant mare before, so I figured I'd give it a go. From the look of it, it seems like I pulled it off pretty well. :ajsmug:

Well welcome to the darker.. arguably funner side of Bronyhood
A link to more Me Gusta.
There is more that uses this as a fetish? Oh god yes there is going to be so many sleepless nights.

Concerned about the well-being and safety of their unborn foal, Shining Armor and Princess Cadance agreed to abstain from intimacy. With only a month left before she's due to deliver, however, Cadence receives a bit of information that pleases her greatly. It will please Shining Armor even more, for he's found himself strangely attracted to Cadance's increasing size...

Lol. Make up your mind! Cadance or Cadence?:trixieshiftright:

Tell that to Hasbro too, they can't seem to decide whether it's "Cadance" or "Cadence"...:ajbemused:

1630556 I'm pretty sure it's Cadence. According to the character tag on this site, it is Cadence also.:ajsmug:

Yeah, it is.

But for some reason Hasbro keeps spelling it "Cadance" all over the toy boxes. And thus, sites like MLP Wikia insist on spelling it that way, because apparently toy boxes are a higher source of canon than the show itself. :facehoof:

And like I was saying, even Hasbro contradicts themselves, because they refer to her as "Cadance", yet at the same time, also refer to her as "Mi Amore Cadenza", and Cadenza = Cadence.

Make up your mind, Hasbro. :rainbowlaugh:


>Cadenza = Cadence.


Not to mention she's referred as "Cadence" in the scrips of the show.

I'll just keep calling her both names until they decide....nah I'll call her Cadence.

Yeah, it's blatantly "Cadence" for so many reasons, yet there's still people that will rabidly argue that it's "Cadance" just because of toy boxes. :facehoof:

Not only is Cadance wrong, but...my brain keeps wanting to pronounce it "kaah-dance" which just sounds weird. :rainbowderp:

Weird... just earlier i was looking up Shining & Cadence pics and came across the cover pic for this story... then i decided to read some fimfiction and saw this... XD i cant wait for the baby to come! It will come... right?

163056416307441630728 I spelled her name "Cadance" because I'd seen it written that way multiple times before, not because of anything on the toy boxes. Trust me, I wondered about the strangeness of "Cadance" myself, but based on the sheer number of times I'd seen others spell it in that way, I assumed it was her correct name and that it was just an oddly clever or quirky intentional misspelling. Obviously, I've been mistaken this whole time, but to be honest, I'm not about to go back and fix the error in either this story or The Second Time Around. In the future, however, I will be sure to spell it how it's supposed to be spelled. For now, let me just say that if you read the story, I thank you, and I sincerely hope you enjoyed it.

1630919 Oh, you. :twilightsheepish:

1631237 Thanks!

1631287 That is kinda freaky...lol. I'm glad you liked the story, but this was a one-shot; as of now, I have no plans to write a follow-up featuring the foal. I'm not going to rule out the possibility entirely, though, so stay tuned!

Oh goodie, a fanfic with Princess Cadence and Prince Shining Armor (as of the season 3 premier mind you). It'll be added to my read-it-later list since I have some stories on my plate atm.

PS. Congrats on getting featured

16269421629713 Ryan Stiles is second best Carol Channing... Second only to Carol Channing.
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Very nice. Pregnant women / mares are amazingly sexy!

1631835 Love it.

1631850 Often surprisingly so. Thanks for the positive feedback!

Okay. My mind has been blown, along with a somewhat different body part. Sorry is that is disturbing.

1631929 I just hope that both your mind and your..."other part" were blown in a good way. Dang, that's also disturbing. Anyway, thanks for the read, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

each one dreaming of the other and the promise of the new foal who would soon join their family.

... covered in heaps of semen.

1632030 Behold, the many different representations of love. Thanks for the read!

Oh, yes. Oh, so very, very yes.

Pregnancy fetish? Check. Milking fetish? Check? Lovingly married couple? Check. Perfect combination.
And extra points for any clopfic that doesn't just rehash the same tired oral->oral->coitus formula.
The writing is fantastic; it flows perfectly and the vocabulary is just the right level to be intriguing but not off-putting. Honestly, I'm jealous. I doubt I'll ever be able to write this well.

There is only one thing that I would consider a mistake: Shining's magic aura is pink (or "light rose" as the wiki calls it); Cadance's is light blue.
Other than that, I can find absolutely nothing wrong.

Easy like and fave.

“Nope,” Shining answered, shaking his head. He rested his chin on the top of her stomach and stared into her eyes. “Alliteration.”


Pregnant mare + milky boobs+ pregnant sex = awesome.

I don't read this kind of story, but I will comment.
I'm not sure it works that way for equines. Because, you know, two-arm-long penises.

I have to stop clicking on these.

1628904 Wanna see the first one I fully read?
I may seem like a terrible person, until you get to the end :p

Hmm... not bad. Liked seeing another ArmorCadence fic from you, even if didn't TOTALLY read the first one you wrote with them, after their wedding and such. I mean, did read it, but kinda skimmed over it for most part, didn't read the scenes as much as the plot, little as it was. But... I don't know, just seems... wrong? I mean, it was HOT, and I did like it, and not against pregnancy or horse pregnancy (even if before/near the beginning of reading this, checked out blog recently with regards to another user watching here with a pregnant pony, and about discussion with how horses birthing is uncomfortable), but seemed to focus more on the pregnancy than the actual sex? Even if that was the purpose for this story and reason why it MAY have gotten featured possibly? And have read stories with even less sex (namely Sexty Minute Ponies prompts) than this by you/others, and not solely watching you for clop stories/scenes (watching your other account too, if not aware).

Just kinda... conflicted, I guess. Not to mention it doesn't address/refer to if Shining Armor in your own headcanon, is still a unicorn at this point or if he's possibly become an alicorn (one of my gripes with the pairing, despite its cuteness and the stuff it did in the Season 2 finale, unless Cadence in your world is an alicorn with mortal lifespan or something else; think I read something somewhere (if not here on this site) recently with her having a disease where despite being alicorn, would pass before some years). But still, it was a nice story, loved how sweet they were to one another and did kinda like the breastplay scene, even if horse bewbs aren't same as kind that were in Gratuitous Gratitude. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png Also wasn't sure if some remark in the story or comment here or something was thinking about, made me think about if getting another story before this one takes place (and hopefully, not thinking about Time Turner/Twilight pairing story I briefly skimmed before this, that didn't explain much about them like few of your others have)? Sometimes I hate having faulty memory, and not feeling like reading it again... at least, right now. :twilightblush: Sorry if disappoints, but not in a bad place or anything, since I liked it, but not loved it despite my fondness for the pairing. But still, I would love to see a story with their unborn foal after it HAS been born, if possible! Cause that'd be cute, even if hope you would keep it out of the sex, unless it was grown-up enough like Scootaloo in Practice makes Perfect. :twilightsheepish: Or had it on your clean account.

Anyway, here's hoping don't take it too hard and that I get to see another story from you before long!

That was an excellent story!:ajsmug:

You did a great job of portraying Shining and Cadence. It was also really hot. :rainbowwild:

You have a real talent for writing, well done!:twilightblush:

Thank you and good luck!:yay:

Random story of the day: (A new thing I'm trying, for when I run out of facts.)

"The time has come for us to leave the vault and return home!"
"It's beautiful, the earth has recovered after a century of waiting."
"What's that off in the distance it looks like a rainbow colored.... mushroom cloud." O_O:rainbowkiss:
"Everyone back in the vault its not safe!"
"After a century of waiting and the nukes are still falling,and when the hell did nuclear blast become rainbow colored?"

Whoa, this is pretty hot. Friggin' awesome job Jube! :twilightsmile:

All I could think about throughout this was if the kid was grabbing his dad's cock from the inside and yelling "HEY! I'M IN HERE!".

1632388 I must have remembered it wrong then. But anyway, thank you very, very much for all of the love! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

1632413 Yes. Yes they are.

1632567 :pinkiehappy:

1632574 Glad you liked it!

1632600 I agree wholeheartedly with this equation.

1632977 Thanks for all the feedback, man, but I'm not sure what I'd be upset about. You said you liked the story, and that's fine with me. So there were some things you didn't care for as much as some of my other works? It's not a big deal.

1633131 Thank you much for both the response and all of the emoticons!

1633153 Glad you liked it. Thanks!

1633385 I laughed harder than I should have at that comment. I hope you enjoyed the story anyway, even if that image did pop up in your mind.

*reads comment*
*stand and slow claps*
That was a beautiful comment:rainbowlaugh:

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