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Aetherlord_Ignus


Hi, I'm Aetherlord_Ignus. I am a high-school student and my favorite pony is Twilight Sparkle. I have a variety of geeky interests including writing, retro games and tabletop gaming

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My first attempt at a hardcore sad fic. It's a short one-shot, but I hope you like it.

Ja, most interesting. I think it needs to have much more detail, hardships and length though.

3 MOOSTACHIE out of 5, and a like.
:moustache::moustache::moustache:

:fluttercry: Jeez you really tugged on those heart strings.

Wow, you really got me teary eyed, and on a shorter story, too. well done:applecry:

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I don't agree with you. It's no hardcore sad fic. Maybe a soft-, or medicore sad fic,but no hardcore sad fic.
In a hardcore sad fic you have to turn the lives of the ponies upside down. You have to deal with loss in it and make the ponies suffer agony. Even if it's hard and you dislike the idea, you have to make them suffer over the death of a beloved one. I know it's cruel, but otherwise it just won't be a hardcore sad fic.

Bronydragon:moustache:

1626969 Well, by hardcore I meant being purely devoted to sadness. And I can't simply kill off Applebloom. Look at that sweet little face :applecry:

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Purely devoted to sadness. Applebloom recoveres at the end, so nnnope.
I know how sweet and lovely she is, but for a sad fic you have to let somepony die. Even if it's hard and you want to smash your hands for writing such cruel words. Take My Little Dashie or A summer Twilight. You will most certainly cry, because life was good and happy again and then someone ripped your dreams apart, or because they lost a loved one and suffer agony now.
Really, if you want to write a decent sad fic, read those two stories and write a sad fic that makes me cry.
If you succed I will admit that you are able to write sad fics and that you did a good job on it.
Sorry if I'm too hard. :fluttershyouch:

Bronydragon:moustache:

1628144 Challenge accepted. See you at the end of a box of tissues :raritycry:

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Let the dams break. :pinkiecrazy: I'm ready for everything. Make my heart kill itself with its veins.

Bronydragon:moustache:

Okay... if you're going to write a sad fic, go all the way.
What I'm saying is, you should've killed Applebloom. I'm sorry if this sounds harsh, but the ending almost ruined it for me. Something is only really sad for me if there's a sad ending.

Nonetheless, this was an excellent story, and I enjoyed it very much.

Thankyou good sir,
Fighting Oreo

1636453 Just getting used to this lol. I wasn't going to kill off someone in the first sad fic that I right. Baby-steps my good sir :moustache:

1631504 To the word processor! No ready shall escape my wrath :rainbowdetermined2:

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I'm awaiting your story. :rainbowdetermined2:
Pm it to me when you're ready. I can't watch authors anymore. Knighty didn't change it, so it's the only way. Sorry.:fluttershyouch:

Bronydragon:moustache:

5 out of 5
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

(I'm happy that AB lived)

So good, but made me tear up. :fluttercry:

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