An eerie chill in the morning air woke Twilight from her almost blissful slumber. Despite the circumstances she was at peace, now she’d found and recognised love in its greatest form. Though Spike had engulfed himself in dark magic, he never truly changed who he was, and his love for her was stronger than ever.
She rose from one of the makeshift beds that the ponies had created after they’d all made themselves comfortable with Zecora. It was still night time and Spike was missing from beside her. She took a cursory glance around the room to find the others still sleeping; Rarity with Sweetie Belle, Applejack with Big mac and Applebloom, Rainbow Dash with Gilda and Scootaloo, Fluttershy reunited with Angel Bunny and Pinkie on her own sleeping in a very awkward position.
Twilight felt a little uneasy not having Spike next to her. She quietly hopped off the bed and crept outside of the hut. She didn’t have to look far to see Spike sitting on a fallen tree. He seemed lost in thought. Curiosity got the better of her as Twilight approached the engrossed dragon. She peeked over his shoulder to see he held a strange looking crystal in his hands. She stared at it intently, seeing a mixture of swirling dark colours within.
“It’s…called a Solma. It’s a little dragon magic that they preserved over the course of time. The Dragon King showed me how to use this, before I succumbed to the dark magic.” he held out the crystal to Twilight who gasped at the knowledge she’d been found out. With a reluctant hoof, she accepted it, staring deep into the violet stone which swirled with a strange essence.
“What sort of magic is this? Crystal magic?”
“Partially. The crystal is just a container, what’s inside is the real magic.” he placed his claw on the crystal and it lit up, the darkness inside fading at the mercy of a light glow.
“What’s it do?” she asked. The young dragon sighed and looked up into the sky. His eyes seemed worn and old to Twilight.
“It… holds a part of the soul; my soul. When I took up dark magic, I divided my soul into two parts, one to be tainted as I have been, and the other to preserve the Spike you once knew.” there was silence for a minute as Twilight absorbed Spike’s answer. She held in her hoof, half of Spike’s soul. It vibrated slightly in her grasp.
“But what if your body were to be destroyed by the darkness? How would this half of the soul be of any use to you?” she asked. Spike chuckled.
“Well, it’s supposed to create a new body around it… but there’s a method needed to begin the process, which I don’t know about. That method was lost to even my kind long ago.” Twilight felt the crystal grow heavy in her hoof.
“Why are you telling me this?” there was a moment’s hesitation in him as he looked her in the eyes. It was then Twilight noticed he’d somehow gone blind in one eye. She remained silent as he was about to reveal all to her.
“I…”
Author's Note: Well, that's book one done. Many of you will hate me for leaving so much unexplained, but that's just temporary. You'll have to wait for the next story. I might answer some questions within that. But in the meantime, you must suffer!
So long for now...
Woot
You bastard... leaving me in suspense like that...
Still this fic was too awesome for me to hate you. I look forward to the next one.
the amount of hate i feel for you right now is indescribable....but i'll still wait for the next story...damn you
I...
God damnit!
SONOFABI.... Naw just kidding. Loving the story so I can't wait for the next part!
Danm short chapter definitely one of my fave fan fics hope next book is justas good
this kind of cliffhanger is just evil.
Write the next book... NOW! lol, Kidding. Take you time man, don't rush it. This was a great story, and I'm happy I took the chance I did reading it. I give it 5 Twilights out of 5.
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You bastard!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm going to recommand your story to MallaJong1 right now, BUCK! WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh well, onto the next one!
Blind, huh? Interesting.
Also, if it's really done, you might wanna change the "Incomplete" label on the story.
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I can't wait to start reading the next book
This is Spike. Is your Spike. The one you created before you fucked it up with so many unnecessary quotes from other stories. So nice to have him back.
That thing about the eye... Was that a Tsubasal Chrolicles refference?
I hope we have more Luna on the next story.
Alittle annoyed
But you got the thing done fast while maintaining a high quality
Please continue
how much dick is going to be sucked?
Are you gonna post the link in this story for the next part? Would be cool!
God dammit! The amount of hate and love (platonic, don't be getting any fancy ideas) I feel for you right now is through the bucking roof!
Well you misspelled one thing and the chapter makes the cut.
reunited get that man
WHEN WILL BOOK 2 COME OUT! i downloaded this whole thing onto my tablet and i plan to keep doing so until the series ends...... so like i have stated before... WHEN WILL BOOK 2 COME OUT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!
1661996 If you're lucky, by tonight. Look out for the blog with the link.
You bitch...sorry but that was the first thing that literally came out of my mouth when I finished this EXTREMELY short chapter.
Still a great story though.
1662012 the only thing i can use to describe my reaction to that is...
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:O Nooooooo
Eh, there was a lotta mix Feelings about this Story.
At first I was really looking forward to this fanfic I always enjoy fics that do a grown up spike. but as the chapter began to come out my feeling did this
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Now I feel that rating this story as a whole isn't a good idea. As it really changes in terms of well written and fun to read to Gary Sue's Deus ex machina happy hour.
Chapter 1-5: great spot on! I mean it really has great pacing at this point and it all nice and lovely you really get a feel and taste of how spike leaving and how it has effect each of the mane 6. we even get some great foreshadowing and just all around it great and enjoyable read
Chapter 6-9: Ok not as great as Chapter 1-5 but, He doing an update every day not all of the chapters are going to be spot on, pacing is sped up a bit to much and a few details are missing here and there but noting to bad that make me wanna quit reading or anything. He must be building up for a climax event.
Chapter 10-12: At this point it a total feel of ugh, we hit about every fan fic Cliché find In a Red and black OC alicorn. ok he can take on , he stronger then in magic, faster then and can take more hits then . and he the only one that able to fight anything off?! Why is everyone cannon fodder? why is there just a void full of Deus ex machina line across the pages? Why was there no real interaction with flutter shy or pinkie? There just a lotta untied ends aren't even foreshadow that any info will shed light on the plot holes.
If this is book 1 of X or whatever you need to take time and slow down. there no point in posting if you just going to post what chapter 10-12 was its just not fun to read nor enjoyable. and pretty much is like a big middle finger to yourself and the readers.
If you only able to update 1 chapter a month so be it! If that chapter is anything like chapter 1-5 was then it worth the wait. but daily updates mean jack if just like how Chapter 10-12 were
With that said, I do wait on book 2 and your story up to chapter 8 is better then anything I could write.
our relationship as an author/reader has now hit a love/hate one..please bring out the next book. or may Cthulhu crush your house and eat you with his hot chocolate. amazing by the way
So Spike Basically made a Horcrux from harry potter like voldemort?
really liked the story, cant wait for book two
Bring it Soooooon
its gonna be sooooooo awesome
this story deserves a mustache like spike
You little bitch, I hate you, and yet I love you dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
1662028 I'd have gone for: ' You evel, evil bat! How dare you toy with our emotions thus!'
T'was a quote from Gimme Gimme Gimme, the UK TV Series.
Love the story but this epilogue basically caused this reaction
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This is my reaction to this cliffhanger NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
I can't take this suspense.
1662111 Can you post another chapter linking to book two when it comes out? It'd be much appreciated.
This cliffhanger, I must say, feels incredibly forced >.>
Damm you cliffhanger, my oldest nemisis.
You know, I have a bad habit of going crazy over things like this, because I WANT THE NEXT FUCKING CHAPTER NOW! Please :3
Wow this. Cliff hanger is bigger than princess molestyas.... Sorry got to wait for my next comment
It's over?
: FFFFUUUUUUUU...
Oh well, I will await for book 2.
i hate you with intencity of a thousand suns for all these bucking cliffhangers BUT I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEE YOU AND THIS STORY OF PURE AWSOMENESS
fffffffffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuckkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!
This cliffhanger! GOD WHY!!!!!
THIS IS
TOO MANY GODDAMN CLIFFHANGERS!
A wild cliffhanger appeared! You cannot escape! NOOOO!!!!
Damn you for this...but I look forward to the next story!
You bastard...how DARE YOU for leaving a such cliffhangers when it was getting even more integrating sigh well its still awesome and can't wait for the next one
not hearing the end about twilight and spike's relationship? meh
not hearing the end about how spike became blind? aww, but I wanted to hear that
not hearing the end about the crystal, and the lost magic of the dragons?
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please rectify this
I believe that this was unnecessary and made it not as good of a cliff hanger as the end of book one should have been.
YOU CRAZY BITCH, I HATE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW!
Awesome Job!
P.S. If there wasn't a sequel, I would have to verberly punch you in the face.
Also before I forget, I love how you showed the dark/dragonic side of Spike, him being a 'dick' fits prefectly with his humorous character.
And even after his change he still keeps with friends and gets his Twilight.
1662138 All teh meems
Oh you...
RRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Too many cliffhangers.
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
Why!? no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no . JUST NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
....... A cliff hanger......
For this-
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