WARNING: Although Content Rating is "Everyone" there will be murders. If you are uncomfortable with death then don't read. They won't be too graphic so don't worry too much but I give you the warning.
This is BBC's version of Sherlock put into the My Little Pony universe. I figured that Sherlock wasn't really a big Equestrian thing so... yeah. This is my attempt.
PLEASE leave constructive criticism and if any of you would be so kind as to design a pony version of Mr. Holmes for me then that would be wonderful. Based off Benedict Cumberbatch only. Not because I dislike other Holmeses but because this is a parody of that version. Jeremy Brett is my favourite.
Chapters (1)
Oh my, haven't seen a story with Braeburn or Mare Do Well in a while!
You really should indent new paragraphs/dialogue lines, or at least leave a space between them.
A nice start and I am interested keep this up!!
BTW You might wanna create better paragraphs but other than that its good.
1615908 Noted, consider it done. Thanks.
1614383 Well, they're not in it yet but Braeburn will be soon and so will Mare-Do-Well. However, it may not be the Mare-Do-Well that you know...
P.S. That should be intriguing.
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What do you have in store fot us?? 
1627043 I can't tell you. I could hint in an annoyingly "Close-but-not-close-enough" kinda way though? Nice Profile Pic by the way.
1628962 Ah thank you!
you know, if this was any other fandom I'd say that warning was wholly unnecessary, but since this is the mlp fandom, i wouldn't be surprised if there was a subset of people who are that squeamish. then again, the vast majority of bronies are more than mature enough to handle that sort of thing (even some of the children) so it still seems rather pointless. especially since right afterwards you said:
i don't see the point in putting that warning there, it seems like a waste of time (possibly even more than writing this comment)