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JaketheGinger


There are a few Jakes on this website. I'm the ginger one.

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Life was pretty good for Rarity. With her own business, she had the best friends anypony could ask for and a loving (if slightly annoying at times) sister.

But nothing ever stays the same forever.

After a traumatic accident within the family, Rarity is forced to care for Sweetie Belle, learning how to be the best sister she can possibly be. Yet old memories resurface and she will be forced to confront her own upbringing too.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 32 )

Welcome to this new story of mine that I think is perhaps my best work so far. Now, half of this will take place in present day and the other half is flashback.

So...enjoy! :pinkiehappy:

Oh, fun fact: Streten Narroh is an OC not made by me but instead, the awesome Merc the Jerk.

GO AWAY, YOU EVIL DOWNVOTE! :flutterrage: This story should be nothing *but* upvotes, dah-link! It's fab! :raritystarry: (Made me cry, but then again, I'm a wimp, lol :derpytongue2:)
I demand MOAR! :flutterrage: (If, um, that's ok with you? :fluttershysad:)

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Ooh, I like it! It's a clever idea to make a story out of, particularly in making Rarity a titch overprotective. It fits rather well.

Well written and sweet, I'll be interested to see how this develops. <3

I like how this story is going. It's interesting to think how much the bond between Rarity and Sweetie will grow if Rarity became Sweetie's new guardian.

this should have a tragedy tag.

Ugh, looks like we got some parasprites in our midst...

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Stories can't have the Tragedy and Sad tags at the same time, it's against the rules because they "conflict"

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I don't understand what you're referring to. :applejackconfused:

1609828 Nonsense I've seen tons of stories with Tragedy and Sad tags at the same time, you must be new here. :eeyup:

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:facehoof: Learn to distinguish between sad and tragedy... maybe then you'll understand.

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Sorry, I could'a sworn that I saw knightly or poul post a blog post about it some time ago :/, I R SMRT :facehoof:

1610044 Well if they did I must have missed it. :applejackunsure:

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Parasprite is what some bronies call those guys who just go and dislike everything.

While it's not my cup of tea, it's well written like most of your stuff, my amigo. :ajsmug:

I like it, it's always enjoyable to rad something dark but I have hopes of a happy ending somehow.
keep the awesome work up :D :heart::raritystarry:

any story that involves sweetie is a story I'll look at :yay::yay:

1610044 That was Wanderer D. You can find the blog here.

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Thank you, and I was not aware they made it okay. Thank you again :P

One or two pacing issues (you need to make things happen faster), but otherwise interesting. :twilightsmile:

Ah, a very touching beginning to a promising story! I shall track this.

A beautiful and heartstrings-tunging beginning, keep going! :twilightsmile:

The nobody thing is a bit glaring but other than that this is pretty good so far. :eeyup:

“She’s got to know sometime. She will know some time. Fillies aren’t stupid, trust me. They will sense if something’s wrong surprisingly quickly.”

That right there sums up what's already happening and what's going to happen soon. :raritydespair:

I can tell for a fact Sweetie Belle won't take it very well. And of course it's no surprise that Applejack took the news so well, her own parents aren't around anymore either for reasons unknown so this isn't new to her. She might just be the shoulder Rarity and Sweetie Belle need to lean on to get by. :ajsleepy:

Glad to have an update!

poor sweetie is not going to take the news well:fluttercry::fluttercry:

Now this is an interesting tale. As far as I can tell, this is your 2nd best work so far, only just behind Role Reversal. So... MOAR! :flutterrage:

I'm wondering if there is a Scoots foreshadowing on her being tired, but that is just me wanting it to happen lol. MOAR :flutterrage: Sorry Fluttershy gets mad when you make her wait for chapters...:flutterrage:

Upon discovering the death of her parents, Sweetie Belle was crushed. She felt she would never recover. However, with the assistance of the police, the criminals responsible were placed behind bars for life. Sweetie grew to hold what is good and right in high regard and took it into her hooves to protect the citizens of Equestria from ever experiencing what she had. With Rarity's assistance and a modified Mare-Do-Well costume, Sweetie Belle begins a new life fighting crime.
Sweetie Belle is...
Batmare.

I have no idea why I came up with that, but I couldn't resist.:rainbowkiss:

I'm cleaning out the stories that I have been keeping track of starting with the oldest. Could you please tell me if this story is still active?

Just to confirm, They were killed in a hit & run?

a beautiful yet sad start to the story

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