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Three changelings head out on Nightmare Night as, well, themselves, what's the worst that could happen? Cover Pic by : ToxicKittyCat
To be honest, I wish this fic was more comedic, but it's not, well, as far as my taste go. I ment to have this done by Halloween, but as you can see, didn't happen. Still, enjoy! :D
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Way to end it like that/ Not like you're planning a sequel or anything.
Good story.
Awesome
I WANT MORE!!
A Changeling version of the CMC. This feels like an acutal episode.
Well...
It's good but....
Would be:
Celestia gave her sister a quizzical look. “Who does?”
Luna sighed. “Lightheart. I barely saw any of her subjects at the wedding, and she never saw me.”
Celestia’s face turned grim.
But apart from that, it's pretty good
:1609232 Totally not. And this is completely not a precursor to any future projects. *we need a liarjack icon!*
1609365 Thanks!
1609438 Thanks! And don't worry, I'm not done with this yet.
1609632 Me too, but it's a shame that my finals papers had to happen RIGHT NOAW! Seriously, more shall come.
1609782 Thanks so much! I think that's the highest complimant I've gotten, well, ever!
1609831 Fixed it!
Seriously, thanks everyone for your kind words, and while this story may be a one-shot, you'll see more of the characters, and who knows, maybe even more interaction between them and the CMC.
1610263
you know, you chould have saved a lot of typeing by saying: "there IS going to be a sequel".
just saying
1610301 Well, technically, it's not going to be a true sequel, but it kind of is.
Besides, I like typing. 
1610322
i will sit and wait with everypony else for the reast.
it IS, and it is NOT?
...OH WELL!
More!!
1610439
I shall, once I get my school work done, XD
This is fantastic! The Changeling fillies are wonderful, and the implied backstory for the princesses is very touching. The only question is, will the sequel be about the adorable, adventuring fillies or the emotionally distraught princesses?
1610554 Actually, it'll lean closer to the princesses, more in particular Celestia, and it'll start with a certain purple unicorn. Like I said, it's a sequel, but in the traditional sense, however the characters shown in here will be in the sequel, and more crazy stuff will happen, Celestia and Luna's past revealed, an ancient evil, Twilight's missing/thought dead sister, and other stuff.
I like this!
That is definitely new!
The Changeling kids were adorable, and I like the history you created here.
Chrysalis as Celestia's daughter?
1610738 Thanks!
I'm glad I was able to make them adorable without being too annoying. 
I made a first in the world of head cannons! 
what the buck this is a good story with a damn big cliff hanger.
hey this is pretty funny man, you get a like...and maybe a fav...maybe, ok you get a fav
1611589 So, love or hate?
1612024 Thank you!
1612192 eh dont mention it
closer to love but not quit there.
1612496 Nuts. Oh well, it just leaves room for improvement.
This was awesome. Really liked the dynamic between the three main characters.
1612503 thats the spirit.
1612520 Thanks!
Not bad. The biggest gripe about it is that you broke one of our language's biggest grammar rules. No character should ever speak in the same paragraph. If someone speaks after someone else has already spoken in that paragraph, you must start a new one, even if it means having paragraphs that are only one sentence long. When people do not do this, it becomes difficult to keep track of who is talking at any given time.
1621633 Funny, until now, I'd never heard of this grammer rule. Eh, there's always room to learn. I'll make sure to add it to my list of rules and try to remember it. That gripe aside, did you still enjoy the story?
1624093 It was okay. There is a lot of room for improvement, but we can't all be professional-grade authors, now can we? Someday, when you're much more experienced, perhaps you could come back to this, but for now, aside from the paragraph errors I mentioned, I think you should probably be satisfied with how this turned out.
Gotta love them changelings, this story was pretty funny, especially when Cadance and Armor showed up.
1736165 Thanks! And thanks for the fave as well!
Celestia seems a tad flankhurt.
1834561 Ah, this may appear to be true, but things are not always as they seem.
Thanks for the fave as well.
1836136 Of course. I was just joking about Celestia a wee bit, but it's still quite a fun story.
1836252 Glad to hear you enjoyed it!
This was a very nice story, and Light heart seems just, almost fitting. Just enough to be perfect for Discord.
I would say to use the elements, but then the rest of the changelings would be abandoned.
I WANT MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
3093314
Thanks for the praise, and I plan on making more fics with Thrax, Thorn, and Splinter in them, but could I get just a little bit more feedback? I mean, that is...if you don't mind.
3094159 Um...It's great??? That twist with Chrysalis being Celestia daughter is gold I think. That needs a fic all to its self.
3094188 Hmm, I might actually do that, once I get some other fics I have in the works rolling.
That was adorable and d'awwww worthy.
Cya
Raziel-chan
6872416 Thanks for the comment.
6876100 Any chance that related fic you mentioned in the comments will be eventually released? I wouldn't mind finding out more about Chryssie being Celestia's daughter in this verse.
cya
Raziel-chan
6876147 I really want to, although I am not sure when I would release it, but I'll try to find the time soon. I haven't given up on this universe, but unfortunately real life keeps me from expanding upon it. So in short, yes, it will be made, but I have no idea when I'll release it.
6876329 Ah, alright. It's okay, take your time, I'm just glad it's still in the plans.
Cya
Raziel-chan
Huh, not the only story of yours that I've enjoyed. Keep up the great work!
9581845
Thanks for stalking, I mean following, me.
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