Sombra's Advisor

Furion #1 · Nov 13th, 2012 · · ·

Short, but entertaining. I like it!
Oh poor Shale, stuck carrying out the orders of an individual who's intellect is but a hundredth of his own.

Everyday We Shufflin

Everyday We Shufflin #2 · Nov 13th, 2012 · · ·

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I like it

nowego

nowego #3 · Nov 13th, 2012 · · ·

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Haha, some good one-liners.

I also like this overall depiction of Sombra in general.

Casca

Casca #4 · Nov 13th, 2012 · · ·

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Eh, it's kinda vapid. None of the jokes are particularly fresh, and it's just 1000 words of lampooning Sombra's palace design by having it come out of the mouth of a portrayed idiot. Not going to downvote, but, well, eh.

Weeeman

Weeeman #5 · Nov 13th, 2012 · · ·

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darkironpony

darkironpony #6 · Nov 13th, 2012 · · ·

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Nice.

Mr. Grimm

Mr. Grimm #7 · Nov 13th, 2012 · · ·

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Well, to be entirely honest, I can't blame Sombra...

I would totally build a spiral staircase to screw with people too if I was an evil king...

Tom Marlow

Tom Marlow #8 · Nov 13th, 2012 · · ·

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Do you see this crown?

Vector-Brony

Vector-Brony #9 · Nov 13th, 2012 · · ·

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shale. Shaaaaaaaaale. I have a bitch of an itch in my left ass cheek.
This came to mind when reading this

Supahsnail

Supahsnail #10 · Nov 13th, 2012 · · ·

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1610694

That's what I was thinking of when I wrote it. :D

ColdGoldLazarus

ColdGoldLazarus #11 · Nov 14th, 2012 · · ·

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I personally thought his layers and layers of stairs and defenses and stairs and traps and stairs (and did I mention the stairs?) to be pretty clever, but I won't deny that with the whole 'pit in the floor' thing, he isn't exactly a master architect!

Vector-Brony

Vector-Brony #12 · Nov 14th, 2012 · · ·

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1611188 love it. Team four star sre some funny guy's.

ForSpite

ForSpite #13 · Dec 6th, 2012 · 1 · ·

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So, I'm not against making fun of King Sombra but.. your jokes just don't work. I can tell what you were going for, with his aid's deadpan delivery but you just didn't pull it off. It's not that I think the stairs part of his design was good, it's just the delivery and the fact it's not that funny. Heck, if you're trying to make jokes about the giant hole in the throne room, at least mention the lack of a safety rail and OSHA.
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Yeah, the door that traps you in your worst nightmare and the pressure sensor trapped floor where pretty nice.

And I think the author seriously overestimates how easy it is to destroy ancient magical artifacts.

ColdGoldLazarus

ColdGoldLazarus #14 · Dec 6th, 2012 · · ·

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1749738 Indeed

TheLostNarrator

TheLostNarrator #15 · May 15th, 2014 · 3 · ·

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Hi! I just wanted to let you know I did a dramatic reading of this story with a few other VAs. Thank you for writing such a hilarious story. XD

PresentPerfect

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PresentPerfect #16 · Jun 15th, 2014 · · ·

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This is one of the funniest stories I've ever read. :D

Chinchillax

Chinchillax #17 · Jun 18th, 2014 · · ·

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That was amazing, hilarious, and short. Good job!

Xanatos Speed Chess

Xanatos Speed Chess #18 · Jul 11th, 2014 · · ·

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Um, didn't Twilight say Sombra hid the Heart in his tower because he knew most ponies were too scared to enter? And didn't his last trap, um, beat her (making her rely on Spike)?

Supahsnail

Supahsnail #19 · Jul 15th, 2014 · · ·

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4395244 Wow! This is the most recognition any of my fics have ever gotten! In fact, I'm pretty sure this is the most recognition anything I've made has gotten. I am honored that someone would make a dramatic reading of something I've written. If I remembered my youtube password, I'd give you a like and subscribe, but... um... I haven't remembered it in about four or five years...