Humanity in Equestria

by SPkon107

OC Announcment

New Character

Kon here I need a new original character(s) for two of my current stories Humanity in Equestria and Operation: Equestrian Assault. Here’s the basic info for what you should include. This is optional you don’t need to comment anything and if you do with your permission I will add your character in one of my stories and you will be given credit for your character.

1) Please give me a message or comment with a bio. Such as what your character looks like, how my main characters or other characters meet them, and other things. I would be hoping for an OC that will defiantly present some action in this story.

2) I am expecting for the OC to have some fighting experience or something else in that area.

3) State if your OC is a human or a pony and state if they are a male or female.

4) Only two OC per brony or pegasister. (state if you are from the following.)

Thank you for reading your character will be placed in my story or stories with your permission and you will have credit for your creation.

Only five will be picked. enjoy

Comments

[Chaos Nightmare]

OC commander Shepherd femshep human she is us military is good with assault rifles and reapers (swords)(oh and yes this is a reffrins to mass effect)

[Violet Runner]

Violet Runner: He is a Unicorn Stallion with a light brown mane and tail, tan colored fur and two interlocking brass gears for a Cutie Mark.

He's Steampunk, can fix/make anything that runs on steam, clockwork or early 1900 combustion engine,and specialises in experimental machinery (plains/airships and automobiles) and weaponry (Flintlocks, revolvers and muskets) and tests all of them him self.

He used to a live in Manehattan where he would work on airships, then moved to Ponyvile where he had a small shop where he would fix/make clocks and other clockwork items when the city became too crowded for his tastes. But moved to a warehouse in the mountions when ponies started to complain about the noise and small explosions coming from his garadge. He met the mane six through Rarity who would go to his shop when ever one of her sewing machines would brake.

He looks like my Profile pic only with a horn (yes he wears pants from time to time).

[MADC3]

Name Zack Ryder-gender male- race Human-/half Hispanic half cauciasan- bio was raised by separatist forces during world war 3 during ages 12 to 16 mother was very with ill lung cancer and died. when he became 13 was rescued by the us during retaking of Australia.the biological Father was a scientist who worked for us forces. lied about his age to serve in the army was often known for his for his eagerness in taking suicide missions.father was often known to show him around many weapons so he grew up with a passion for constructing deadly weapons out of nearby materials. Hates pigeons with a passion. He has no fear of death but fears the death's of his allies/freinds. Has short spiky black hair and stands at 5:8 feet tall-- tan skin and has an eyepatch covering his right eye. Eye color is grey.

[batran]

Name- Brandon Tran (Non-pony OC character)
Race- Human, Asian
Gender- Male
Age- 23 or 40 (choose either)
Looks- Moderate amounts of hair (Doesnt cover the forehead), Dark brown eyes, and facial hair around the chin and the lips
Personality- Nervous, and shy to new people. But a good strategist overall.

During his double digit years, Brandon had played lots of strategy video games, puzzle solving, etc. and found out he is pretty good at them. Brandon studied Political Science during his years in science. He wanted to be a senator for the state of Pennsylvania or at least Maryland and try to work his way up to become a vice president of the USA. He ended up becoming the Mayor for the County of Frederick. As one of the first powerful brony leaders he conducted laws to respect the brony (Bronies became a culture and maybe heresy later on) population. Almost a year later he have been hired as a lieutenant to go on the space craft called Arch Angel. This is where his adventure begins.

[batran]

looks like 4 has already been made

[SPkon107]

Thank you so much
Focusphobia for his original character (Lance-Corporal Gregory "Rook" Newton)
frenchfriegy for his original character (NAME: Joseph Spier)
Violet Runner for his character (Violet Runner)
MADC3 for his character (Name Zack Ryder)
batran for his character (Name- Brandon Tran)
your characters will be presented on my story and you will have credit for their creation.
Note: if you are a pegasister and i wrote his. notify me and i will chaneg that.
"thank you so much
OC Announcment closed for now until in future chapters.
"Thank you for reading
not accepting new OC unless if i reconsider thank you

[batran]

1760675

Thanks! btw whens the next one comng out?

(just in case you didnt know, my character should be in this story not the other one... cause you know... arch angel in the bio)

[Violet Runner]

1760675 My OC was chosen.

wait is he the only pony OC?

[SPkon107]

1765132
yeah i noticed when i read the Arch Angel and i think i'll open another one when the rest of the cre is thawed out maybe in five or seven chapters later depending on how the story is progressing

[SPkon107]

1765170
yup your OC was the only pony OC. and your pony has been chosen

[samuel200308]

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[batran]

so about 1-2 weeks for each chapter?

[Diomedes]

Layout is muuuuuuuuch better. However the vibe of the story is still 90% cheese, and has little to no fluidity to it. I think it comes down to Steven being a very 2 dimensional character in the end (along with smaller faults). Either change his character to fit events around him, or bring in another who has more of a fleshed out personality. Really wished I hadn't missed the OC draw, eh well ><

[SPkon107]

1793640
i see what you mean and don't worry about the OC draw i will post another in the futer when i post another when i have the ship land i

[Diomedes]

1799309 If you fancy try writing up an armoury and force list for the human military, just so I can predetermine a character without making a dozen guesses on what my character can/can't be/have.

[SPkon107]

1799628
so you're asking what kind of weapons are involve in the story right

[Diomedes]

1799855 Weapons, vehicles, troop units, armour types. Just so I don't say 'My character has A, B and C' and you have to reply 'Oh, your character can only have S, D and H'.

[SPkon107]

1799891
Ok i'll messege you when i have it set.

[Diomedes]

1799912 Good stuff.

[batran]

i wonder whats taking so long.....

[SPkon107]

1806900
the reason for the wait is that i jave an editor and he;s currently editing my chapters as we speak so sorry for the wait. and also i have family coming for the holidays so i wont be able to type but i sent about three chapters to my editor so i can at least post them i will resume typing on the 5 of january sorry i will be back and i will be checking daily for notifications and messeges

[MADC3]

Thanks SPkon for accepting my oc. (squeals with delight)

[SPkon107]

1842905
you're welcome your character will appear soon

[samuel200308]

spkon I think that you need to write more often you need to know on January 5 but when you come
well come to write more often I am Polish but I like your stories

[samuel200308]

I'm sorry but the history of an error in translation