The story behind my OC, Rei Sonkei. (His name is Japanese for "Bow Respect") It was going to be longer and more violent, but it turned into a paper for English. Sorry.
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Lance Skyes
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Well, time to read this.
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Well, it's okay so far. I mean, it's not like I have anything huge to argue about, other than suddenly meeting pinkie and becoming frie-
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You never mentioned anything about this colt having previously been human! What do you have to say in your defense?
Oh, and also, meat. Ponies are vegetarian. Where did they get meat?
Apparently his name is irrelevant to his talent. Well, didn't see that coming, nosiree.
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Could use a bit of work, perhaps involving removing your character from interaction with any of the mane cast. This tends to make them into a Gary/Mary and makes people angry.
Suddenly, character is mentioned to have idolized Luna? When did that come around?
Oh, and you suddenly know where Silver's hiding.
Well, I'm done with this self-insert. I can't read any more of this without becoming angry.
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I can see your frustration and anger, and I'm well aware of why you are angry. Let me clear some things up.
1: No, Rei was never human, but he does have prior connenctions to me IRL.
2: Okay, yeah, you got me on the meat part.
3: Explain to me what "Gary/Mary" means.
4: You got me on the "suddenly idolizing Luna" part too.
5: Rei always knew where Silver Blaze was hiding, but he felt it irrelevant to the beginning of his story because he never had the courage or strength to go anywhere near his town after the tradgedy.
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Sorry to be really late, but a "Mary Sue" or "Garry Stu" means a verity of things.
1. They are generally flawless.
2. They are good at everything they do.
3. Everyone likes them.
4. Have some sort of magic power that nobody else has, and is overpowered.
5. Has a sad or scarring back story.
So, that pretty much covers the things you should avoid when making a character.
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Okay, I've found what you are objecting to and will do my best to avoid those in the future. Thank you.