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Blarghalt


I fooled you. I fooled you. I got horse stories. I got horse stories. I got all horse stories.

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Equestria's mafia is run by the most unlikely of gangsters.

Edited by: p0n00b.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 96 )
Comment posted by Blarghalt deleted Feb 5th, 2013

I am officially stalking this.

Whoa, auto correct suggested stalking-horse. No idea what that means, but it seems pretty fitting.

Interesting concept, I'll keep this one on hand to read. Hope you continue on with the other members of the Syndicate :raritystarry:

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I will. Next up is The Fence. :pinkiehappy:

The pets are-:pinkiegasp:Oh. My. Agawd. Must TRACK!!!!!

Niiiiiice, pet mafia :rainbowlaugh: Can't wait for more!

So worth the reading, plus listening to some Sly cooper music to add to the atmosphere :derpytongue2:

You... :twilightangry2:


Are genius! :pinkiehappy:

:rainbowderp:Well this took awhile to read,:twilightangry2:"Nobody said there'd be Math! I BLAME OUR SCHOOLS!"

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Welcome to OBAMA'S EQUESTRIA :trollestia:

This is truly one well-oiled operation they have going on, I wonder whatever got them into the business and who is the big hancho of the Syndicate? :rainbowhuh:

Hold on a second. Gummy is the 'Cleaner!':pinkiegasp: but he doesn't even have teeth! Must see how this works:pinkiecrazy:

I always wondered what the average velocity of a laden owl was....

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Must. Resist. Python Reference.

I aprove! I aprove! I aprove! MOAR! If that's ok with you of course... :yay:

Still waiting on the gummy and peewee ch

Now this is just perfect, The Syndicate is sounding pretty dangerous at this point :fluttershyouch:

Okay, so I was wrong. Gummy is not the cleaner, and I honestly don't know how I came to that conclusion. However, using what you've told us, and using the process of elimination, I believe I know what his role in this is. and it. Is. Genius!!:pinkiehappy:

This.... This makes more sense than it should....

Oooooh buck! This gun be good. :rainbowkiss:

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Story's finished, I'm afraid. Might write a sequel somewhere way down the line, but the buck stops here for now.

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*Just now notices Completed*

Well, it was a pleasure reading, sir.

:pinkiegasp: I thought Gummy was the brains and I'm glad I was right this time, but......:rainbowderp:

*cocks shotgun and unsheaths flämberge*okay everypony, lets get ready to kick.some.animal.ass.
*fluttershy whimpers*:fluttercry:
don't worry fluttershy, we won't hurt angel, i pinkie promise *preforms pinkie promise*

Bitter much, Gummy?

The idea of a crime syndicate made entirely of the Mane Six's pets is strangely appealing. Adding Philomena is just icing on the cake. Flaming icing. The best kind. :pinkiecrazy:

Thank you for this. I'll definitely have to keep it in mind.

1625059 Indeed! And it all makes sense, too! :pinkiehappy:

This is brilliant, and I hope you do write that sequel somewhere down the line. :pinkiehappy:

Staircases? Woo boy. None were supposed to be violent.

Last third paragraph.

What's "They Syndicate"?

After Philominas message, why is there a "we".

"we was 'intense'" didn't make much sense to me.

"She liked burning things."
EPIC CARNAGE TIME!

Ummm... Blocs?
Right before "Operation Faustkrieg".

Plus, I see the Faust part. What does it mean? Lauren Faust?

RD seems rather cold and... aloof. It's been established that she does, indeed, love the little tur... tortoise.

Pinkie and the Brain. I see what you did there :raritywink:

somehow it all makes so much sense. makes me wonder if rainbows pet selections hadn't been rigged originaly so that the eagle would win, and tank broke the plan.

Huh, well this was certainly a unique story. Loved every chapter of it, and I do look forward to more of your work like this.

So...no Pee wee in this one ? :fluttercry:

Still I wonder how the Syndicate dealt with Spike during that "Just for Sidekicks" episode ? :twilightoops:

Nice overall storyline and great way of showcasing the pets in their own unique roles. :pinkiehappy:

Keep up the good work.:twilightsmile:

gummy is the brain?
thats so awesome:rainbowkiss:
is quite a unique story
i loved gummys character and :pinkiecrazy:

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Pee Wee returned to his nest family. Check the first few seconds of Just for Sidekicks (S3E11).

This was brilliant in every possible way.

The brain. Pinkie and the Brain. You mad genius.

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A sequel, yes please do so.

That was a weird combination of adorable and hard-boiled, and I loved it.

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This is awesome...I guess? It's kinda hard to tell...I mean, sure I totally fine with the pets being some sort of mafia...but...taking over the world?

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It shall be glorious. And furry.

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Oh, unquestionably.

I do, however, welcome our new furry overlords.

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