And then there's this asshole.
Equestria is a land of Peace, but all lands are eventually touched by the War of Creation. Sent down from Heaven to investigate signs of Hell's encroachment, a High Angel discovers that Equestria is about to become the newest battleground in a war that has lasted almost since Time itself began.
WILL NOT BE PREACHING ANY RELIGION. I will not be preaching any religion, just using elements from some. Think of it like Diablo or Supernatural
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Nice. Go on.
*Snort* Bwa-hahahahahaha haha-ha.....
For some reason, that was incredibly, ungodly funny.... Could be my lack of sleep for nearly twenty hours, but still... Whew, can't wait to see more. Ha!
INTERESTING. A Archangel
I say good sir, this is a bloody good story. I have problrms seeing mistakes so therefore I won't be able to spot 'em for you. But man will this be good.
Kinda like were this might go so I'll give you a chance with this so be careful (like a opinion from a sad loner could mean anything...
where did my life go wrong)
This is awesome!
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Yeah unfortunately I can't see what that image is.
I have some problems with net. Later i will try to chang it. what i wanted to ask was: "Can i have some more??"
MOAR!!!!
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i like it so far but Cornelius seams a bit OP
also that reaction from Celestia
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Don't worry, there will be definite checks on his power. He's not gonna be OP super-cheat codes
Overall, awesome story.
Interesting indeed
Dun...dun...DUN!!!!
More please before my head blows up from waiting
When I saw this, I knew it was a recap but also I knew that it also might have shown what last happened on the show..... But great work keep it up.
Nice Ending!
CLIFHANGER POWERS ACTIVATE!!!
NOOOOOO! Cliffhanger, my arch-nemesis.
Oh, and just for the sake of it, FIRST
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INTERESTING...
AGAIN
Good chapter, dat ending and:
"Rate, review, rhino, reload, etc."
But i can`t find a rhino
You had me at, "No seriously. God damn it." Great start to what I hope will be a great story.
Surprise! They're related. I really like the comedy in this story. Being inside of Cornelius' mind is fun.
He delivers that line for the single purpose of making HIS week more interesting?
I love how he is so completely sure of his superiority that he tempts fate for the sake of entertainment. Its bloody hilarious!
Heh, those guards at the door. Rather dirty trick for an angel of light. Anyway, first Discord disappears, and Luna just vanishes? Cornelius you fool, she's been kidnapped!
...possibly.
1993359 She didn't vanish, she just left him in his room while she left to do 'Princess stuff'
YES I AM ENTERTAINED!
Nice.
Just two mistakes.
It should be 'But' and there is no punctuation at the end of the sentence.
2043088 Thanks, I completely missed that one
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My reaction
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I honestly can't tell if that's a good or a bad thing
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I feel the need to split a few hairs. Now, this angel here is apparently seven feet tall. With a forty foot wingspan. That seems, to my humble self, a tad excessive. I know you were probably trying to shoot for the impressive, but my poor will can only suspend so much disbelief. Other than that, Ive had a few chuckles at these first two chapters, and so shall continue reading.
...A battlefield for the War of Creation... and you put it under "Comedy"... That doesn't inspire confidence for reading mate.
rofl!!!