These are the untold tales of Xenophilia. Alternate paths that weren't followed, light vignettes, views into the characters you never thought you would see.
1715861 Oh my gosh oh my gosh! Yay new xeno chapter i wuv you!
Edit: just read the chapter, i love it. Also the earliere chapters i love the descriptions on Lero, he sounds like a real hunk of a man, makes me want to be Dashie!
Now, after the second dream, I have to wonder - is there a belief in some kind of afterlife in the Xeno-verse? And if so, would Lero be able to go there?
1715861 So this chapter's a prequel? So what's the chronology of this story? Is it a prequel? An actual side story? A sequel? I don't even know! What's the lifespan of ponies in the xenoverse anyways? Are we ever gonna get a chapter with Lero and Lyra? SO MANY QUESTIONS! It's like this is the Evil Dead 2 of fanfiction. It's DAMN GOOD, but I'm so confused!
I've always wanted to read about the events prior to Xenophilia, and here it is! Yay!
That dream had better not be a premonition. Seriously, I don't want another fic on this site making me sad and angry at the same time. Besides, that alicorn Twilight theory thing is total bullshit. And why would Rainbow be the one with the premonition?
If ever there is a sequel to Xenophilia, I hope the subject will be happier, rather than a gray ol' Rainbow and Twilight reminiscing over their dead herd-mates.
1716063 There's no real consistent chronology of the Side Stories. They're just whatever topics happen to tickle our fancy at the time. I'll try to fit in something on the chronology in the descriptions or comments if it's ever in doubt, although this chapter is even weirder because it's a dream remembrance of the past, which segues into a dream of a possible far flung future, and then goes back to the time around the end of Xenophilia.
That dream had better not be a premonition. Seriously, I don't want another fic on this site making me sad and angry at the same time.
I was thinking the same thing, although it wouldn't make much sense if it was a premonition how long is the life expectancy of these ponies? and why would Twi have wings? I have no idea what direction this fic is going in, but I'm lovin' it so far! Also, that chapter title gave me chills reminded me of a horrible time in my life when I had to co-riff THAT fic
Edit: The only fic that made me sad and angry at the same time was Background Pony, but I'll get to that eventually.
For anyone who's confused... that second dream may be a vision of the future, or it may just be a dream. I don't actually plan to go that far in the future again, so I leave you all to make up your minds.
Amazing as always. I loved seeing Rainbows thought process when she began to fall for Lero. This chapter really really makes me want to reread the others.... IGOTTAGOBYE!
1715861 This is Incredible - the history section fits beautifully with the beginning of Xenophilia, though that second dream sequence kind of threw me. I really and truly hope for more of Lero and his herd's story, and I'm hoping that this is a hint of more to come, but I've never been fond of spoiler scenes like that one.
1716367 no it's a shit fic filled with shit characters and shit writing and the author is too fucking lazy to fix any of it that and apparently he thinks rape is funny he's also, from what I can tell, a homophobe so no it's not a Twilight fanfic it might be worse
I'd love to see yours and/or AnonAuthor's take on hoofball.
Like, have a simple one-shot (part of this compilation, of course) about RD and Lero massacring AJ and Big Mac, just for RD to rub it in AJ's face afterwards. Comes with a nice explanation of the rules (different ones for unicorns/pegasi/earth ponies, maybe? Some specific for Lero?), field, strategies (some RD and Lero came up with, taking his taller, slender body into account), etc. etc. etc.
Just a thought that would add something to this world-building of yours (not that it is lacking, mind you).
Wow there really nothing i can say it a very lovely Story(i will never call this a fan-fiction it to well done) no wait i know what to say To a LONG story full of love and happiness may it warm my and your heart every time it is read.
1716214 AA, another excellent chapter here, although that dream teaser is going to drive folks crazy for a bit, as I'm sure you know. Good job setting that one up (as Dash claimed it was on purpose). The only thing I'd like to see/request at this point is possibly when and how Lyra comes into their herd, unless you are indeed saving it for a Xenophilia part 2. (Something which many many folks are hoping to hear at some point, lol!)
Again, you have done an excellent job spinning such a wonderful tale, and kudos again to both Dash and Archonix for their additions to your world too. Looking forward to the next tidbits of this lovely world. *runs to bookmark Xenophilia for read #3 in the morning.
If we have Alicorn Dash and Twilight that ends with dead Lero and Lyra I personally would be I unfavoriting and thumbs downing this fic, and dropping it like a hot potato. I like this fic and the original Xeno because its a mostly positive romance piece with a happy ending. That gets ruined and this fic may as well be another grimderp for the sake of grimderp story and not worth following.
1716630 I've written 100k+ words on a fairly constant theme here; I have no intention of changing that. Dream or no, that was the distant future; if I continue writing these scenes it'll be in the "past" or "present" of the story. I've got plenty of other places to explore that kind of loss, and I have no intention of doing it here.
This was a glimpse of the possible future of the setting, not the story. Possible. And even so, I have no desire to hurt Rainbow or Twilight that way, rest assured.
Holy crap that dream sequence kinda scared me. I didn't want the rainbow/twilight alicorn thing to be true because it was so sad, and I swear I yelled out "thank god!" when she woke up again. Double dream sequences always get me.
Worst thing was that if it wasn't a dream it would have been headcanon for me for Xenophilia; the old happy ending was almost ripped out from under me. Scared the hell out of me man.
I really liked the look into pre-Xenophilia with Rainbow's thoughts. Very nice.
1716672 I recall a comment you left at the clopfic directory, where you had to struggle to keep dark elements from coming into a story that was supposed to be happy and romantic. I guess the second dream sequence was a compromise, eh?
I'm not real sure what just happened. I am kinda reminded unpleasantly of the ending of Background Pony, to be honest. But then again, given the final scene, maybe lampshading such things was the point? Or maybe Rainbow was just losing herself in a happy fantasy once more.
Which one was real?
Because no decisive evidence is presented, as a reader I consider it my choice to make. And I'm choosing the sad future as the false one. You're right, Rainbow. It WAS just a dream, and a stupid one. Things aren't always rosy, but THAT mess is never gonna happen on Rainbow Dash's and Twilight Sparkle's watch. And if the very natural order of the universe should stand in your way... then I feel a great swell of pity for the powers that be.
Anyway, a good chapter. I know the story has been told and all, but I still get excited whenever I see new Xenophilia content. Lovestruck RD is still the cutest thing of all time.
Hope you all enjoyed AnonAuthor's little prequel.
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Oh my gosh oh my gosh! Yay new xeno chapter i wuv you!
Edit: just read the chapter, i love it.
Also the earliere chapters i love the descriptions on Lero, he sounds like a real hunk of a man, makes me want to be Dashie!
You update, I update.... man, is this going to be an on-going theme?
Lovely.
Now, after the second dream, I have to wonder - is there a belief in some kind of afterlife in the Xeno-verse? And if so, would Lero be able to go there?
1715861 So this chapter's a prequel?
So what's the chronology of this story?
Is it a prequel?
An actual side story?
A sequel?
I don't even know!
What's the lifespan of ponies in the xenoverse anyways?
Are we ever gonna get a chapter with Lero and Lyra?
SO MANY QUESTIONS!
It's like this is the Evil Dead 2 of fanfiction.
It's DAMN GOOD, but I'm so confused!
Suddenly alicorn Dash and Twi dream. Wut.
And so the sword hangs on the thread of time : (
YAY. More Xeno!
wow, just seriously, wow, anon you are just plain out bad ass
1715861 Yaaay! Woot Woot!
I've always wanted to read about the events prior to Xenophilia, and here it is! Yay!
That dream had better not be a premonition. Seriously, I don't want another fic on this site making me sad and angry at the same time. Besides, that alicorn Twilight theory thing is total bullshit. And why would Rainbow be the one with the premonition?
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If ever there is a sequel to Xenophilia, I hope the subject will be happier, rather than a gray ol' Rainbow and Twilight reminiscing over their dead herd-mates.
Oh wow. That premonition was a nice touch.
This one was very sweet and precious, I think.
Damn just...DAMN...
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That depends, do you have another chapter lined up for a Sunday release?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
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There's no real consistent chronology of the Side Stories. They're just whatever topics happen to tickle our fancy at the time. I'll try to fit in something on the chronology in the descriptions or comments if it's ever in doubt, although this chapter is even weirder because it's a dream remembrance of the past, which segues into a dream of a possible far flung future, and then goes back to the time around the end of Xenophilia.
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dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png this was my exact response too, and it was what AA was going for dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png
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I was thinking the same thing, although it wouldn't make much sense if it was a premonition
how long is the life expectancy of these ponies?
and why would Twi have wings?
I have no idea what direction this fic is going in, but I'm lovin' it so far!
Also, that chapter title gave me chills
reminded me of a horrible time in my life
when I had to co-riff THAT fic
Edit: The only fic that made me sad and angry at the same time was Background Pony, but I'll get to that eventually.
good story bro this is very awesome
For anyone who's confused... that second dream may be a vision of the future, or it may just be a dream. I don't actually plan to go that far in the future again, so I leave you all to make up your minds.
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Well, he certantly got us. We have to give him that.
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What, you mean Living The Dream? What could-- Oh my God. (horrible flashbacks circle inside head) Make it stop... (clawing at eyes) ... make it stop!!
Amazing as always. I loved seeing Rainbows thought process when she began to fall for Lero. This chapter really really makes me want to reread the others.... IGOTTAGOBYE!
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Well... the next chapter is complete, but until I get my trusty proof-readers on it. . . nope.
Thank goodness though. I don't need more competish from you.
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Just . . . ughhhhh
1716235 You lucky bastard! You have NO idea what we had to go through!
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The chapter title was actually archonix's contribution. I'm afraid I have no idea what fic you're refering to, and I'm beginning to think that's a good thing.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
And as for your previous statement about Lyra... I'll just say be patient, it's coming dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra2.png
Another great part of the story. Don't ever stop please.
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This is Incredible - the history section fits beautifully with the beginning of Xenophilia, though that second dream sequence kind of threw me. I really and truly hope for more of Lero and his herd's story, and I'm hoping that this is a hint of more to come, but I've never been fond of spoiler scenes like that one.
This makes me want to go and read the main story again.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra2.png
So I think I will! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
A dream within a dream within a dream?
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Oh the feels
...Lyra?
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Is it a Twilight fanfic? (The sparkle Twilight, not the Sparkle Twilight)
I'm happy Anon is still writing this stuff. Even if it is just these side stories. I love reading this stuff!
1716367 no
it's a shit fic
filled with shit characters
and shit writing
and the author is too fucking lazy to fix any of it
that and apparently he thinks rape is funny
he's also, from what I can tell, a homophobe
so no
it's not a Twilight fanfic
it might be worse
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
So, checklist!
[x] Worldbuilding
[x] Warm Fuzzy Feeling
[x] Awesome Foreshadowing
[x] Funny Interactions
[x] Heartwarming Interactions
[x] Possible Sequel
[x] Character Development of both Dash and Leo
[x] Anonauthor being so awesome it makes me feel bad as an author
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...
PFFFF-
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dl.dropbox.com/u/69811530/o7QSP.gif
I'd love to see yours and/or AnonAuthor's take on hoofball.
Like, have a simple one-shot (part of this compilation, of course) about RD and Lero massacring AJ and Big Mac, just for RD to rub it in AJ's face afterwards.
Comes with a nice explanation of the rules (different ones for unicorns/pegasi/earth ponies, maybe? Some specific for Lero?), field, strategies (some RD and Lero came up with, taking his taller, slender body into account), etc. etc. etc.
Just a thought that would add something to this world-building of yours (not that it is lacking, mind you).
Wow there really nothing i can say it a very lovely Story(i will never call this a fan-fiction it to well done) no wait i know what to say To a LONG story full of love and happiness may it warm my and your heart every time it is read.
-Face desk-
Having a connection with the Elements has some fairly extreme effects later on huh?
Werg. . . the immortals curse it could be called. Or blessing. Depends on how far down the line you are I suppose.
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Well... the only other ponies to have had a connection with the Elements of Harmony were Luna and Celestia.
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True. I suppose that sort of puts a damper on researching the effects the have on Ponies, huh?
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AA, another excellent chapter here, although that dream teaser is going to drive folks crazy for a bit, as I'm sure you know. Good job setting that one up (as Dash claimed it was on purpose). The only thing I'd like to see/request at this point is possibly when and how Lyra comes into their herd, unless you are indeed saving it for a Xenophilia part 2. (Something which many many folks are hoping to hear at some point, lol!)
Again, you have done an excellent job spinning such a wonderful tale, and kudos again to both Dash and Archonix for their additions to your world too. Looking forward to the next tidbits of this lovely world. *runs to bookmark Xenophilia for read #3 in the morning.
1715861 Prequel to what? The original story? A sequel? Can't tell which... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png
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If we have Alicorn Dash and Twilight that ends with dead Lero and Lyra I personally would be I unfavoriting and thumbs downing this fic, and dropping it like a hot potato. I like this fic and the original Xeno because its a mostly positive romance piece with a happy ending. That gets ruined and this fic may as well be another grimderp for the sake of grimderp story and not worth following.
TL:DR - Bad idea is bad.
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I've written 100k+ words on a fairly constant theme here; I have no intention of changing that. Dream or no, that was the distant future; if I continue writing these scenes it'll be in the "past" or "present" of the story. I've got plenty of other places to explore that kind of loss, and I have no intention of doing it here.
This was a glimpse of the possible future of the setting, not the story. Possible. And even so, I have no desire to hurt Rainbow or Twilight that way, rest assured.
Delightful, makes me want to reread the whole thing again.
Holy crap that dream sequence kinda scared me. I didn't want the rainbow/twilight alicorn thing to be true because it was so sad, and I swear I yelled out "thank god!" when she woke up again. Double dream sequences always get me.
Worst thing was that if it wasn't a dream it would have been headcanon for me for Xenophilia; the old happy ending was almost ripped out from under me. Scared the hell out of me man.
I really liked the look into pre-Xenophilia with Rainbow's thoughts. Very nice.
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I recall a comment you left at the clopfic directory, where you had to struggle to keep dark elements from coming into a story that was supposed to be happy and romantic. I guess the second dream sequence was a compromise, eh?
I'm not real sure what just happened. I am kinda reminded unpleasantly of the ending of Background Pony, to be honest. But then again, given the final scene, maybe lampshading such things was the point? Or maybe Rainbow was just losing herself in a happy fantasy once more.
Which one was real?
Because no decisive evidence is presented, as a reader I consider it my choice to make. And I'm choosing the sad future as the false one. You're right, Rainbow. It WAS just a dream, and a stupid one. Things aren't always rosy, but THAT mess is never gonna happen on Rainbow Dash's and Twilight Sparkle's watch. And if the very natural order of the universe should stand in your way... then I feel a great swell of pity for the powers that be.
Anyway, a good chapter. I know the story has been told and all, but I still get excited whenever I see new Xenophilia content. Lovestruck RD is still the cutest thing of all time.
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I agree, I've been wanting to see Lyra in the herd for a while now.
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You magnificent son of a bitch.