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SonicRainboomGirl


"I must be a mermaid, for I have no fear of depth and a great fear of shallow living." - Anais Nin

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Welcome to the future of Ponyville, where all the foals you know and love have reached adult-hood. The citizens of this utopia awake to find that Derpy Hooves has delivered a letter to each individual mailbox, something her daughter has written in an attempt to change Ponyville once and for all. Whether she succeeds or not, however, is all up to fate.

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Glad this is back up. It's a wonderfully written masterpiece.

Very heartwarming and emotional. :pinkiesad2:

That was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. :pinkiesad2:

I think I love it :heart:

Got a feeling that there is more than just Dinky speaking there. Stories like this have to be written from the heart.

“It’s called a derp, Silver Spoon. It’s a birth defect; recessive and luckily very uncommon. Thank Celestia MY parents were selective with their breeding!” does anyone get the joke!?

this was very inspiring and heartfelt, seeing dinky hooves write this. :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

Thanks everyone, this truly was written from the heart! :twilightblush:

Loved this! Brought a tear to my eye :raritycry:

Keep writing! Would like to see more from you :pinkiehappy:

Powerful stuff :moustache:

I personally don't like the content because it seems hellishly out of line for how Ponyville works. It is extremely well written, though, so there's that.

I have to ask, though, where did the lesson the town learned from Zecora go and where was the anti-superiority attitude they displayed toward Trixie?

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The town learned a lesson from Zecora? :rainbowhuh:
I understand your point here, but old dogs can't learn new tricks. The show's villains are pretty hellish monsters as far as their attitudes. And let's face it, Ponyville is very look-oriented. The "ugly" ponies end up going nowhere. Derpy is a mailmare, Snips and Snails are laughed at by the entire school, Luna is scorned. Trixie will most likely never go anywhere near Ponyville again, shamed.
This is just a look at how Ponyville COULD be. Who knows what impression we're getting from the third-person omniscient view-point?

Comment posted by MONSTERmama deleted Jan 11th, 2013
Comment posted by SonicRainboomGirl deleted Jan 11th, 2013

I'd love to see a squeal to this, but if you've no intentions of then that's fine. It was good read and I like it, made me take a look at how i act.

I can see why she would mail it to everyone though. It doesn't single any group of ponies out, so in a way Dinky doesn't fall to the level of her tormentors by trying to lash back on them solely.

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She mailed it to everyone so that people would either change their ways or be sympathetic. A bit of evaluation and shaming by a large group of people goes a super long way.
As for a sequel, I'm not sure if I will write one yet. It's definitely on my mind, though!

still kind of awesome though, even if I was off on her reasoning.

I look forward to reading it if you do write it.

(Hugs derpy and dinky)Don't worry about those mean ponies, I love you both for who you are, and if they don't like you... I'll make them like you, no. worship you, as a GOD.(Dramatic backround music signaling that an event that will change the entire world is about to happen) Time to build Equestrias first hydrogen bomb.

This story hits realy close to home for my self I know very well how Dinky feels with the constant harassment and the friends and family that are just slipping away that leaves you with an unmatched loneliness. I am glad to see that someone understands. :twilightsmile:

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Sadly its something I'm all too familiar with. Hugs for you :pinkiesad2:

1590275Thank You.for that it realy makes me feel better.:twilightsmile:

:applecry: I know how the bully thing goes. That was so sad!!! And Doctor Whooves just goes POOF! Sparkler made me giggle though when she said they could go f-ck themselves. And the absolute heartbreak when Featherweight got it on with Sweetie! Well done!!

Comment posted by SonicRainboomGirl deleted Dec 19th, 2012

You all make me want to write endlessly. Thank you so much.

I want to be more of a part after readong it:pinkiehappy: great job:pinkiecrazy:

:raritycry: :applecry: :fluttercry: :pinkiesad2:

No more words are needed.

Take all of my feels! Take it! :flutterrage: But in all seriousness, masterpiece this is! Made me like :pinkiesmile: then :rainbowderp: finally :pinkiegasp:

That was one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, and I've read many. :heart:

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Wow, that's quite an amazing compliment! Thank you so much :pinkiesad2:

She is just like me everyone says I'm stupid , retarted , ect. even some ove my so calld family says that to me for talking about mlp and vido games mostly minecraft and that I am a Pegasister :raritycry: :applecry: I am so alone I only have one fernd
P.S I can't spell:facehoof:

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I'm so sorry to hear about that. I hope this story has made you feel that you aren't alone in this world. You truly aren't :pinkiesad2:

3099522 i know how you feel. people call me wierd and with my sensory disorder they kinda use it against me without knowing. i really wish that people could accept, if not encourage everyone's unique personalities. i wish people could accept that i like to make people laugh even if it's at me, because their smiles are worth the pain of being taunted later, that i also enjoy being out of the ordinary, i bury myself in books like Twilight sometimes but not long after i act like Pinkie. i want to be accepted, despite what childhood troubles my parents caused because of fighting and making me extemely afraid to even play in the mud until i was 8. i feel like Dinky and when i am old enough i might just leave all of my home town friends behind simply because of people knowing weaknesses that i have that are used agianst me. i have a phobia of knives and guns plus i love animals, so people talk about hunting around me. i hate people eating away learning time but they decide to talk and blurt out anwsers when i am figuring it out. i have always had problems and people use it against me. i might not talk to anyone at school any more so maybe they will understand how much will power it takes not to strike out at them. my true voice is no longer existant! as you bronies and pegasisters as my witnesses, i swear a lifetime vow of silence!

P.S. sorry for rambling!:twilightblush:

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Rambling? Definitely not! What you've written was extremely meaningful and heartwarming. Thank you so much :pinkiesad2:

3099522 I cant spell either, I usely replie on autocorrect :derpytongue2:

This was beautiful!
Sequel?

Fuck ponyville.

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