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This was from my account on Fanfiction.net, yes. Is there something wrong?

Please continue. This intrigues me.

I think most of the downvotes are from the subject material, not the actual writing. I browsed through it for a bit, and it looks pretty solid to me (even if I don't like the subject myself).

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Well for those who read the comments, there won't be any Super transformations of any kind in this story. This takes place before the 23rd World Martial Arts Tournament in Dragon Ball.

I would like to be the one to add this to the group Equestrian Saiyans if that's all right with you. if you would rather it not be there just reply or PM me.

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Go ahead! Thank you for asking me.

1579443 I always want consent before doing anything i may regret.

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Don't worry. He'll be getting screen time.

it''ll be a interesting development for the ponies to tap into "KI" as well.........

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That's an interesting idea.

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Thanks. I'm still working on Chapter 5. Trying to determine if I should go through the entire first Season with Goku in tow, or do different adventures.

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Thank you for that advice. Those are my biggest faults, though.

Things are about to get 20% more interesting

me gusta... moar please?

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I'm still working on the next chapter.

1674423 cool...

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The next chapter will be an interlude filler while I work out how to include him in the slice-of-life aspects of the series.

1675375 sweeeeet

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The chapter will have some minor adult moments, but nothing overly steamy or sexy.

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