Ragtag and Shooting Star are the kids of Rainbow Dash and Soarin. On this story, you will learn how Rainbow Dash and Soarin first became a couple, how there friends reacted to them as for them being a couple and how Ragtag and Shooting Star came to be (non-descriptive).
Special thanks to Kumkurum and Tukathewolf from DevianART, creators of Ragtag and Shooting Star.
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Ok, first thing is first, as you may have noticed, I have some problems with my spelling, that is because I'm from Puerto Rico, main language: Spanish. Even though I know the language well, I'm not so good with writing it. This is my first story and I decided to make it because RD is my favorite pony, and since nobody made a story of how RD and Soarin officially met, I figured why not do it myself. So anyways, I really hope you enjoy this story, and since I'm still having trouble with the buttons and stuff you can tell me if there are any errors I can fix, these also include spelling. Thanks and again I hope you enjoy!!!!!!!
seems good... ill be putting this on my read later
1575840 well, if you want I can proofread for you
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If you want to, then go on ahead
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And here I was, thinkin' I was the only Brony in Puerto Rico.
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Actually, I'm a pegasister, but don't worry, I have plenty of friends that are bronies
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There are even more? Jeez, have I been living under a rock... wait... oh... oh, yeah... now I remember.
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Well, of course there more silly
This alpha-personalities are very highly strung, aren't they?
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You'll understand better if you keep reading the other chapters... already working on #2
1575840 And here I thought I was the only hispanic pegasister. and great story I am looking forward to it. you got my vote and saludos desde dallas, texas.
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Gracias y espero que te lo disfrutes
This is so damn cute....
First off: LOL
now on to the next chapter.
Awesome
This story could use a little bit of help in the spelling department. :P I'd be happy to point them out, but on a quick read through or two you'll probably see them. Also, when you contract could and not it becomes 'couldn't', the apostrophe goes between the n and the t. Otherwise, keep it up. Awkward SoarinxDash is funny and kind of cute.
P.S. You really don't need more than one exclamation point and three should be enough for any statement. Pretty much the same is true of ?! of which there really doesn't need to be more than one.
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I know, I just get really 'drastic' sometimes, and sorry for the grammar errors, I don't write in english so much
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You do know that spelling and grammar are different are right?
Heh, don't worry about it too much, just keep an eye on it when you write.
Just to be confusing:
(or if this is useful to know)
Going by some people on the internet I should call some of them typographical errors, or a typo as they are sometimes called. Their reasoning is that while the word is not correctly typed out, the error is not in spelling but rather in not typing the letter you really meant to be there.
So, typing 'succes' instead of 'success' (which presumably you intended) would be a typographical error. Whereas if you typed 'gaurd' (an incorrect spelling) intentionally, instead of guard (which is the correct spelling) it would be a spelling error. Either way, I'm going to stick with calling it a spelling error, because for one I can't be one hundred percent sure of what someone intended. In any case, that what most people would call it.
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Entendà todo lo que tu dijiste
And P.S.
Write some story instead of reviewing every single story, be creative... and I don't mean that in a bad way
Google translate is wonderful
Glad to hear it. Yeah, well. I fear that I may lack the creativity or the drive. It's much easier to see the possibilities for someone else's story. The moment I try to write my own I start worrying about all kinds of things that aren't my problem when I am not the author.
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Well, then... Don't worry!!!
Be creative and don't worry
Sorry that this took so long.
I had so many homework and stuff and not enough time (it felt like I was going crazy 
) anyway please forgive me 
and hope you like it 
Ouch
this could not end well
but lets just see where it goes.
i dont het it? how did rainbow dash does and soarin never met in this fanfic if they did in other episode
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Oh, you'll see on the next chapter
Why didn't you use this for the cover art?
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Because I dont really like that offspring