After accidentally creating a weapon of mass destruction, Twilight is forced to confront a choice she made long ago in order to assist the war effort and a secret military order.
If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist, it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standard of nonconformity.
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That's REGIDAR'S JOB YOU FOOL!
Oh great, now there's a rip in the space time continuum in my house. You proud of yourself?
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You damn fools. WE'LL ALL DIE
well... that's rather dark isn't it...
I love dark, carry on
first comment breaking the comments relating to first comment relating to Regidar's ability to appear everywhere?
so.. Shining Armor is a spartan, Twilight is an assassin... and Pinkie Pie is Pinkie Pie though sad when she's alone...
I should never be given a keyboard at 5 in the morning
This prinny is impressed, dood.
Me like it alot, dood!
Upvote JUST for Applejack's pottymouth. Maybe you could make it Humour as well, and have it like Red vs Blue?
Hah, the ending of the first chapter was quite amusing! I'll read the rest for sure, I love your Twilight so far!
Will read.... But why... when I saw the Twilight cover art stuff..... Did I think this story would turn Twilight into Solid Snake?
It's here, it's finally here!
-Minty
(Titles inbound)
I am okay with this.
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
*Is sucked into the vortex*
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Heh, pretty much.
I'm actually not going for a 'hidden-blade' thing with her weapon. It went more like this:
I just think mouth based weapons are a little silly, so it had to go on her foreleg, but then how would she run? Well, I'll just make it retract— Whoops! Assasins Creed weapon.
But yeah, Shining it totally a spartan.
1667601
Thanks!
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I plan on having a little bit of humour, but it won't really be a comedy.
Hopefully nobody minds this.
1667688
Glad to hear!
I was hoping people would be okay with my characterization of our favourite prancing purple pony.
1667929
I'll be honest, I'm not familiar enough with that series to do much in the way of references.
Pretty much all I have is, "War has changed."
Other than that, I just thought the cover art looked cool.
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Oh great, now the crazies are starting to comment.
1668110
Omigosh omigosh omigosh omigosh!
Glad that you like it!
RiL'd, for after I clean my own implements of war.
Edit: You bastard, you keep getting featured
1668234
Ha!
You have no idea how little I was expecting that. This thing got uploaded in the middle of the night, after a holiday.
But hey, I'm not complaining.
You have alot of potential here!
Make it big and make it epic. NAO!
lol i love that first chapters ending
I'm still~ in a dream! Snake Eater! Great job, keep goin and stay golden^^
Darn...looks like I'm late. oh well, let's see what you got. Description sounds promising
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Welcome to the party!
Glad you made it.
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Oh trust me, the stakes get pretty high.
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Thanks!
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First Chapter complete! Love it so far. Your Twilight reminds me of the new Sherlock Holmes movies
ps
"Son of a bitch"
1668529
I love the new Sherlock Holmes movies, you'll probably see that.
I hardly want to stop to comment, great story.
Latin and Greek as ancient Equestrian and Equish? I can live with that.
This story, I like it.
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Oh, Pinkie I love you so much and it hurts to see you sad. Curse the fourth wall! I want to hug her!
This story is excellent.
Your editor missed an error.
Premise is good, characterization is good. Looks promising.
inb4 Featured.
Wait. Dammit.
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C'est la vie. If you wouldn't mind pointing them out in a PM or some such I'll prod Zap until he fixes them.
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They're both so cool, I couldn't choose just one!
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What he said.
Finally, a Solid Sparkle story, All what we need now is the adition of Pinkie Fisher along and we're ready to go
After Pinkie told Fluttershy her story, I thought maybe she was using drugs to cope with her depression....What the buck was that?
1663741 YOU GONNA GET BANNED!
lorl.
dun dun duuunnn
shluck shluck shluck
I MEAN....
yay
Dat possible AC reference
Yes. I like this. I need more. Sorry, didn't you hear me?
I NEED FUCKING MOOAAAAAAAR!
1669017
Nah, she's just really depressed.
She has nopony to cheer her up, because if her friends knew how depressed she was, they never would have been cheered up themselves.
If you look at how they all got cheered up, it always involved seeing Pinkie Pie so happy. It's a sacrifice she has to make.
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I like you.
You're the only one to comment on every chapter.
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ya...but what the buck was with that weird story? Star-swirl? Discord?
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Ohhhhhhh that!
That was a reference to one of my favourite authors ever, shortskirtsandexplosions, and his story, Crisis of Infinite Pinkies.
And yes, it's just as crazy as Pinkie makes it sound.