After losing Canterlot to the Changlings, the mane 6,Spike, and a few others had no choice but to abandon Equestria and jump borders into the Badland's (where the dragons live.) There they create refugee camps, and in these refugee camps each holder of the elements of harmony guard a specific part to the camps....Five years later the group befriends the dragons and they agree to aid there strategy to take back Equestria. With the aid of an Alicorn, A army of dragons, with the leadership of Spike, and the advantage the ponies could finally go home, they could finally go back to Equestria.
All thanks for the drawing go to AssasinMonkey.
older Spike X Rarity shipping with in it with a shipping between my OC, and Fluttershy later on in the fiction.
Rated T for mild violence, Language, and Alcohol use
Taking place in A alternate time line, of the season 2 finale...
FIRST! Ha beat somepony to it.
Hope y'all enjoy my new fic. 
Interesting idea, definitely worth a look.
Author firsts do not count. Also, nice set up. A couple spelling errors here and there, but good overall. Nice alternate ending, sad about Dash though. FIRST 4 real!
and you kill off one sixth of potential readers.
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Changelings need love to survive. They came to Equestria because of the sheer amount of love ponies have for each other.
So, I mean, why would they kill them off? That's their food source. That doesn't make any sense. The changeling party that arrives later would have done better to stay hidden until they could take someone's place and leech some love. Killing RD in front of everyone doesn't really...make sense.
Is this an AU in which the Changelings have to eat something else?
I like the premise. Definitely worth watching.
Spike lives woot
Needs some work with editing. It's an interesting idea but RD dying just...because
? What happens to the element of loyalty? Kinda writing yourself into a corner there but...I'll keep reading.
Ummm they took her body is there going to be more with that later? Or will RD never be mentioned again?
I like where this is going, It is a lot Different. Killing of Rainbow, Just means you will have to look ahead on this one. But I am really looking forward to this.
1587484 It will all be explained later on in the story.
1586403 I try so hard to be Luna, is that where the spelling is incorrect?
Okay, I will correct one paragraph.
Corrected version:
Also, in the description, you said "loosing" when you really meant "losing". That's one of the most annying errors in the English language.
As for the story itself, I'm not impressed. Lots of rookie mistakes. You have incorrect capitalization and punctuation everywhere. The last few paragraphs were noticeably rushed as well. It happened so fast, if someone accidentally skips over even a single word, they get lost.
You need a prereader/proofreader. I've never needed one myself, so you'll have to ask someone else where to find one.
It wasn't paced very well, especially for a death scene. This fiction has the potential to become an epic of sorts, but please be sure to pace yourself. I had the exact same problem so believe me when I say that you NEED to pace the story, or it will fail. But, overall, I liked it, I love the idea, and I shall monitor this story. I look forward to a great story
Also I would be MORE than willing to pre/proof-read your chapters for you!
1588049 Sure you can proof read it.
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ASKDFJHG SWEETNESS!
I will monitor for interest
Is Dash truly dead? This is just too sad.
1589061 It truly is sad.
Why Rainbow Daaaaassshhhhhh?
Where is the love?
1590011 i wanted to surprise everypony, it will be all explained in the end..
Well you have my attention
But no longer can cheer on my RD (best. ever.) 
Half way done with the second chapter which will shed some light on the Dashie getting killed by Changeling thing. See I thought ahead......The problem I am running into is trying to add a twist, I wonder who would be the surprising bad guy that would ending backstabbing the ponies was really on the changeling side all along.
but that is a chapter mean't for another day.
This will run about two-thousand something word's and there will be a fight sequence somepart in it. So sit tight hang on to your hooves and git' Ready for A ride!
1591804 Actually my first choice pony to get killed was Applejack, I am not a big fan of AJ. Rainbow Dash is actually my third favorate pony next to Pinkie Pie. My favorate pony is Fluttershy so she is safe.
No pony buck's with my Fluttershy. No....Pony. 
But glad you enjoyed it Chapter 2 will be up sortly. 
1610178 That's unfair! Rainbow Dash is the best EVER. Period.
Along with Shy's nightmare... Angel the Pimp! Smacks her around like his.... I won't finish that because Shy is cute.
Shy may be your favorite but we already know RD tosses Shy around easy!
1610393 If that little bunny was here, I'd stomp on his bucking neck.
1610408 Angel the Pimp tosses Shy out on her doorstep if she doesn't perform.
1610428 Well shit I'd better fix this. Fluttershy will stay with me for a while.
1610437 Angel is the PIMP he ain't going to let that fly...
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1610471 Well tell him to come at me bro, I ain't afraid of sum' pipsqueak bunny!
1610509 Angel the pimp can toss 200 lbs pony with ease, he's tossing anyBODY!
1610526 I must stand my ground, if I show him any weakness he wins.
But you will, because Shy will *squee*
out of excitement and it will lift up your very soul. Angel the Pimp will make his move
1611316 I must fight him, for Fluttershy!
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bravo bravo but can you take on a cottage full of Angels???
(shhh shhh its alright Fluttershy he held his ground until end...) DEAD
1612937 I come back covered in bruises and blood, I hug Fluttershy she hugs back. That was an epic battle. I had to give them all I had to win.
1613204 HEY! I though you dead?
1613233 I have Rezurection in my name. I'm pretty much god.
1613279 Well Played, sir. But you forget Angel has 'Pimp' in his name, he OWNS Shy.
Amuse him, your never seeing shy again! * chuckle* Bwahahaha!
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1613334 He better hope he love's Tartarus because his bunny ass is going to spend the rest of eternity in there. Mua, hahahahaha!
Celestia Raises the sun, Luna Raises the moon, and I control Tartarus.
Okay, chapter 2 is out, if there is any problem's with the spelling I'll get right on it. If there is anything wrong with the grammar I'll get right on it. Sorry but I wrote this on my Playstation 3 and it doesn't come with spell checker. Also the reason being is that my fucking computer broke, and I won't be able to use it in a while.
I'm going to miss TF2 but a simple computer isn't going to stop me from creating my fic.
1586351 Why thank you, chapter 1 is out go have a look. Before you say something about the spelling or grammar, I wrote this on my ps3. So if there are any problems with the spelling mostly tell me and I'll correct it.
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You've won for now, but Angel the Pimp will be back... mark my words.
1616662 Fluttershy says
1586403thxs, you get A YAY.
1652135 Thank you. Ever since I read My Little Dashie I have been feeling really dirty about doing it.
But the main reason I killed Dashie was because she has A fantastic fanbase. She was so great allot of Dashie fans were shocked at Cupcakes. So when I wrote this, I felt like it would be the perfect way to shock the audience. Now Fluttershy, I do not go even go near that. I am A big Fluttershy fan and I just can't write about killing my favorate pony. Other then that, glad you enjoyed it.
1652256 Actually to tell ya the truth, Apple Jack is my least favorate pony. I was going to off her first but I wanted to have the Changelings kill somepony that will put utter shock into the readers. Then the first name came to my head Rainbow Dash, her element is loyalty, and she would stay and fight to buy her friends some time to escape.
You're inserting yourself in the story? That's kind of... weak.