Before they are able to land on the latest planet they have found, Dark Lance's team of Autobot explorers are attacked. Returning fire, both their ship and the enemy's are forced to crash on an unknown world. With their ship heavily damaged and stasis lock a constant threat, Dark Lance and his team must contend with the Decepticons who crashed with them while simultaneously keeping themselves hidden from the local populace. They will soon find, however, that some planets hold secrets as ancient as the stars themselves. Inspired by Beast Wars.
First time writing anything really coherent, so feel free to tell me what you think. Any tips about writing are also appreciated. Thanks for reading!
What universe is this set in?
>>JDPrime22
For all intents and pruposes, Marvel, since they already publish Transformers and G.I. Joe comics. More specifically, though, the Hub, since I'm going to be using more of the other show's characters occasionally later on. The timeline, though, is set a couple days after the season 2 finale of MLP. I'm using our world's timeline to separate events from each other, so in the story universe, this is happening somewhere around the middle of season 2 of Transformers Prime. I mostly put the Alternate Universe tag up there because I don't think Hasbro intends to do any kind of official crossover with the two franchises.
Can we see The Predacons form the Prime contnuity
Also how does lance know about Earth?
>>Metroid100
Remember that the Teletraan unit in his ship is number six. I meant for it to be kind of like a more contained computer cluster, with all of the active Teletraan units constantly sharing information and storing what they recieve. Also, this means there are at least four more teams with Teletraan units. I intended that this would imply earlier contact with Earth, as was seen in the show.
Also, did you mean Insecticons? Because I don't think the term 'Predacons' has shown up yet in there. I do have some small plans for them, however.
have you heard of beast hunters? its the upcoming third season Transformers Prime which introduces the predcons into the Prime continuty
>>Metroid100
No, actually, I hadn't. I'm going to have to look at that. Unsurprising, since Airachnid was probably freed in the blast that destroyed the Autobot base.
heres some teaser trailers
>>Metroid100
Well, whatever it is, it's big, I'll give it that.
1583275One of the perks of being a member of this Group is that all the latest Transformers news comes directly from me I post any news I find in JDPrimes Fall of Equestria In the comments section so check their if I posted something intersting
>>Metroid100
Good to know.
"some very dangerous"
typo?
>>Jaredsmith1998
No, it's referring to the planets the ship has been to.
You should have mentioned shifters as opposed to changelings
>>Metroid100
Shifters?
1583275 Its name is Predaking, and unlike its G1 counterpart, it is NOT a combiner.
Can't wait for the Autobots to show their robot modes to the Mane 6 and Cutie Mark Crusaders.
1665171 Descendents of one of the thirteen original primes Amalgamous Prime he is also in my story, one of the decepticons in prime was a shifter "Makeshift"
1694392 How do you know about the Predaking
1696865 I paid attention.
1694392 The Predacons in the Prime continuity will be based of of dragons, i could imagine the look on Flutthershys face if she met one
1696885 Probably something like this.
1696911>>1665171>>1575808 The first issue of Transformers Prime: Rage of the Dinobots is out TOMORROW! GO DINOBOTS
>>Metroid100
Okay, so why should I have used Shifters in place of Changelings? I'm not sure I understand what you meant.
UPDATE !!
Nicess
I ahve made a page for your story on the Fan Labor wiki Link right Here
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So now the Autobots and Decepticons get to experience the power of Poison Joke?
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Poison Joke strikes again!!
1853501 Rainbow Dash had better wait until the Bots are cured before they have that race. I want Skybreaker to win, so that she has to let Rarity play dress up with her, and more importantly...*puts on sunglasses*...to knock Dash off her high horse! YEAHHH!!!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png
Wonder what the Poison Joke did to the Cons?
I'm gonna guess that Skybreaker gets a pleasant surprise when he finds out what the Princesses are really like.
Also:
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Damn, Dark Lance and Skybreaker gave one shock after another to the Princesses, Shining Armor, and Twilight!
Also:
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Jet Engine, eh? jejeje Skybreaker is going in jet form in mid-race uh? I wanna see the reaction of dash and the rest jeje...
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Epic race time! And since Skybreaker doesn't seem like the type of Bot to boast if he can't back it up, I believe Rainbow Dash is going to find herself being used as a model for Rarity's clothes!
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Sees update.
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I will now proceed to read!
So Energon radiation is not only used in magic, but it's also used for every ability that the Mane 6 have?
So a changeling has captured Skybreaker? I guess the race is going to have to be put on a hiatus.
Nice chapter! Here, have some badges!
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cool but i hope the rest of the autobots arent just ponies maybe they can be griffons diamond dogs dragons or others equestrian animals
>>cobeoe
Don't worry, I've already got a few planned.
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I will now proceed to read!
I've got to say, it's nice to see that Dark Lance is being smart by not trusting Wingshift right off the bat.
And it looks like only one of the protoforms will be hit by a meteorite, and it will land close to the Autobot's ship. I wonder what alt mode that Autobot will get? Perhaps, since the scanners on its stasis pod will probably be damaged, it will turn into either a Flutterpony or a Seapony.
sSomething tell me that Wingshift is the "dinobot" of this story
...Dinobot... why you died?
I love this story!!!!! ohhhhh, more please!
i reckon it'll be either timberwolf or manticore
I'm going to go out on a limb and say Pheonix, but I honestly have no idea.
Congratulations, by the way, on being one of the only Transformers crossovers I've been able to read recently without cringing every other paragraph.
Write on,
Legion
Damn, so much for the Elements of Harmony being able to hurt the Cons. Now Fireburst and Bloodwing are more powerful then ever!
But something tells me the power-up won't last, and when it wears off they'll be weaker then ever.
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Here is your cookie.
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Cookie! *omnomnom*
So, wait, does that mean my wild guess was right? Or is that just for the compliment?
Write on,
Legion
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Wild guess was correct.