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A lifestyle like Twilight Sparkle's doesn't bode well for the mind. Constantly learning, constantly thinking, trying to find applications for what she's learned wherever she can. But its reached an apex; The world's a big and complex place. There's only so much one mare can take in...

She's burned out, doesn't want to study anymore, and goes for a walk around a snow-covered Ponyville alone with her thoughts which just won't let her relax.

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Comments ( 4 )

This was a rather nice story. There were one or two grammar issues, and a handful of typos. But overall, this was a rather nice fic to read.

I started reading the letter to Celestia and I did not know that it was from Zecora till the end. I just assumed that Twilight was under the influence of Zecora's speach patterns. :facehoof: :rainbowlaugh:

I quite enjoyed this, there were a few grammatical errors, spelling, commas (or lack thereof), but otherwise it seemed well-written. Have a like and...one of these:twilightsmile:

This would make a good episode

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